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Gospel. Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 These effects make no sense. Fix your grammar and spelling, study the s*** out of the OCG, find some better pics and try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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seattleite Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Ok so you have "White noise" and "Warp noise" all up in here... one or the other will make the cards make sense. I don't usually care for capitalization but you are capitalizing random filler words like "Is". Looking past that the effects are ok, nice concept, synchro is underpowered since it requires synchro summoning, THEN Special Summoning just to stay on the field for 1 turn and inflict 1000 damage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 You told me to review this? I said singular cards only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292841155' post='4867115'] my bad dude who squash your toematos lately ??? can you reveiw any ways ??? [/quote] Maybe tomorrow or something in Japan. Right now it's night, and I'm sleepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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endphase Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 First, find better pictures for "Warp Noise Brickrannok", "Warp Noise Crimzok", "Warp Noise Carrynok" and "Warp Noise Deffensivenok". Then, don't use random capital letters. Fix your OCG. Use correct grammar. The effects are not original and bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 I read only the first card and couldn't understand a word of what you were trying to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cp14harpie Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 since i am nice guy I will try to help you Warp noise crimmanok [s]When This Monster Is Sychro Summon Removed This card From Play. This card can be Special Summoned when it is Removed From Play. When This Monster Is Sychro Summon Removed from Play "Warp Noise Crimzok" and 1 other "Warp Noise" Monster in your Graveyard. During your End Phase Removed This Card From Play. During Every End Phase Inflict 1000 to Your Operent"s Life Points[/s] When this card is Synchro Summoned, remove this card from play and you can remove from play "Warp Noise Crimzok" and 1 other "Warp Noise" monster from your Graveyard.. During your Main Phase, you can Special Summon this removed from play card. During your End Phase inflict 1000 points of Damage to your opponent and remove this face-up card from play. Warp Noise Brikrannarok [s]If This Card is in your Hand Removed This Card from Play This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when it is Removed From Play. during your End Phase Removed This Card From Play. Once Per Turn Draw 1 Card[/s] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while it removed from play. Once per turn, draw 1 card. During your End Phase, remove this card from play. Warp Noise Crimzok lore [s]If This Card is in your Hand Removed This Card from Play This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when it is Removed From Play. during your End Phase Removed This Card From Play. This Card can only be used for the Sychro Summoning of "Warp Noise Crimmannok". Once Per Turn Draw 1 Card [/s] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while it removed from play. Once per turn, draw 1 card. During your End Phase, remove this card from play. This card can only be used as a Synchro Material monster for the Synchro Summon of a "Warp Noise" monster. three cards and ill view the rest nxt time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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