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This is a new Archetype im planning to complete
i call them the Bloodline hope you like them :)
Bloodline Info:
Bloodline is a new archetype of DARK Fiend-Type monsters that tooks card advantage by swarming the field with Bloodline monsters especially Level 2 or lower monsters. Some Bloodline uses the card advantage to destroy the opponent's cards (e.g. Bloodline - True Shock) most powerful of all of them is Bloodline - Chaos Burner which tributes 1 Bloodline to destroy all monster with atk lower than the tributed. Its first effect helps this by making the ATK halved.
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[spoiler='Bloodline - True Shock'][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/55/317901k.jpg[/img]
Lore:
Once per turn, you send 1 face-up "Bloodline" card you control, except this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.
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[spoiler='Bloodline - Compactor'][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/2206/317901t.jpg[/img]
Lore:
If this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 1 "Bloodline" monster from your deck to your side of the field. Then shuffle your Deck.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Bloodline - Shadow Eyes'][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6318/317901r.jpg[/img]
1 "Bloodline" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster
This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once. During your opponent's Main Phase, you can Synchro Summon using this face-up card you control as a Synchro Material Monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Bloodline - Chaos Burner'][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/4116/317901p.jpg[/img]
Lore:
1 Tuner Synchro Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monster
Any monster that battles with this card has its ATK halved after Damage Calculation. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Bloodline" monster you control to destroy all monsters on the field whose ATK is equal or lower than the Tributed monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Bloodline - Murder Hound'][img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4116/317901p.jpg[/img]
Lore:
When this card is Tribute Summoned, You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bloodline" monster from your deck to your side of the field. This card gains ATK for each "Bloodline" monster you contol x 200.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Bloodline's Nest'][img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3787/317901.jpg[/img]
Lore:
Once per turn, you can add 1 Level 2 or lower "Bloodline" monster from your Graveyard. During the end of the turn you did not Normal Summoned or Set a monster, Special Summon 1 "Bloodline" monster in your Graveyard. It gains 1000 ATK, and it is destroyed at the end of the turn it declared an attack.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Bloodline - Ghost Chaser'][img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/684/317901h.jpg[/img]
Lore:
1 "Bloodline" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, this card gains 600 ATK, until the end of this turn. If this card declares an attack, change the Battle Position of all monsters on the field to Attack Position.[/spoiler]
Ill keep adding if you like them!

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Now this is a pretty awesome archetype. Usually I look past these because people usually make all the archetype cards' effects long and clunky, but this was well done.

First 2 monsters make a decent combo with each other

The tuner synchro is... ick. "Cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects". And it's not that hard to summon, so it shouldn't deserve to be this hard to get rid of.

Chaos Burner has a cool effect and requirement

Overall 8.5/10
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changed shadow eyes into a more appropriate effect

added a new monster
[spoiler='Bloodline - Murder Hound'][img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/9783/317901w.jpg[/img]
Lore:
When this card is Tribute Summoned, You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bloodline" monster from your deck to your side of the field. This card gains ATK for each "Bloodline" monster you contol x 200.[/spoiler]
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Bloodline - Trueshock, fixed grammar (I believe); "Once per turn, you send 1 face-up "Bloodline" card you control except "Bloodline - Trueshock" [b]to the Graveyard[/b] to destroy 1 card your opponent controls." (to the Graveyard is the main think you left out of this one)

Bloodline - Shadoweyes, [i]"This card cannot attack directly if it has already attacked a monster."[/i] that bit of its effect is [b]unnecessary[/b] because its effect says that it can attack all of your opponents monsters, not 2, 3, 4 times, etc.

I really like Bloodline - Chaos Burner's effect.

Bloodline - Murderhound, you do not need to capitalize [b]you[/b], like you did in this cards effect. Also I believe the last part of its effect should read... "This card gains 200 ATK for each "Bloodline" monster you [b]control[/b]." (if I'm wrong about the ocg, at least fix control)

Anyways all of their pics are really good, but their effects are all different. When I think of an archetype I think that all their effects will deal with each other (not just their names), sort of like Trueshock and Chaos Burner are similar. Anyways, we all do it differently and overall these are some nice cards.
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added two new cards

[spoiler='Bloodline's Nest'][img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3787/317901.jpg[/img]
Lore:
Once per turn, you can add 1 Level 2 or lower "Bloodline" monster from your Graveyard. During the end of the turn you did not Normal Summoned or Set a monster, Special Summon 1 "Bloodline" monster in your Graveyard. It gains 1000 ATK, and it is destroyed at the end of the turn it declared an attack.[/spoiler]
[spoiler='Bloodline - Ghost Chaser'][img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8185/317901c.jpg[/img]
Lore:
1 "Bloodline" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, this card gains 600 ATK, until the end of this turn. If this card declares an attack, change the Battle Position of all monsters on the field to Attack Position.[/spoiler]
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