Excess? - Crystal Queen Ailia

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[center]So, I came back to YCM and saw these being made, so I figured I'd give one a shot. Effect is kinda suckish because I changed this from being a Crystal Beast excess monster at the last minute, but, meh.

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[i]Effect:
This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Exceed Summon. When this card is Summoned, you can place 1 Spell Counter on this card for each overlaid monster. Once per turn, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 700 to add 1 Spell Counter to this card. When a Spell Card you control would be removed from the field, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card instead. By removing Spell Counters from this card equal to the level of an overlaid monster, you can add 1 Spell Card from your hand to the Field. The ATK of all Spellcaster-Type monsters you control is increased by 200 for every Spell Card you control. [/i][/center]

[War Chess]

I liked it, but there seems to be some OCG mistakes.
9/10

[Ghoulish]

[quote name='War Chess' timestamp='1292882388' post='4868602']
I liked it, but there seems to be some OCG mistakes.
9/10
[/quote]
Dude, if you see OCG errors then correct them or don't mention it, no use in saying it without specification

OCG:

"This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Exceed Summon."(Not to sure baout that first part, doesn't seem right though). When this card is Summoned, you can place 1 Spell Counter on this card for each [b]O[/b]verlaid monster "under this card". Once per turn, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 700 to add 1 Spell Counter to this card. When a Spell Card you control would be removed from the field, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card instead. By removing Spell Counters from this card equal to the level of an [b]O[/b]verlaid monster, you can remove an [b]O[/b]verlaid monster from this card and place [b]it [/b] in your Spell and Trap Card Zone. "Increase the ATK of all Spellcaster-Type monsters you control by 200 for every Spell Card you control."

think thats right anyway

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Thanks, wasn't sure of Overlaid was to be capitalized. Also, I think the first part works, as Synchro Monsters can be special summoned via other methods if sent to the grave, so this is saying it couldn't, it put in the same situation.

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Fixed the effect; another card should be up in a second.