Tee-Jaie Posted December 22, 2010 Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 CRATER HELLION LV MONSTERS [Spoiler=Crater Hellion LV3] [img]http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/4922/224490r.jpg[/img] LORE: When this Face up monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select and destroy 1 monster on the field. If the destroyed monster was a WATER attribute monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of this card. During your next Standby Phase, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 Crater Hellion LV 6 from your hand or deck to the field. [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Crater Hellion LV6] [img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/959/224490g.jpg[/img] LORE: During battle between this attacking monster and a DEF position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponents Life points. During your Standby Phase, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Crater Hellion LV8" from your hand or deck to the field. [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Crater Hellion LV8] [img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/3438/224490f.jpg[/img] LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Crater Hellion LV6". You can activate this cards effect by paying half your Life points. When this card is destroyed, you can add both "Crater Hellion LV3" and "Crater Hellion LV8" from your Graveyard to your deck. Then shuffle your deck. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smashsquatch Posted December 22, 2010 Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 These are pretty good for the most part a few OCG errors here and there but pretty good! I do have to comment on you Hellion Lv. 8 though, you see it seem's kind of stupid to pay half of your life points to return the monster you summoned back to your deck and then shuffle your deck. I see what your thinking of but in all honesty I wouldn't pay half of life points just to return it and have the odds of getting a weaker monster or a more powerful monster that I might not even be able to summon. Besides that pretty good! 6.5/10 Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee-Jaie Posted December 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 Whoops! I meant to add the LV 3 and LV "6" monsters. my bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 22, 2010 Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 OCG Fixes. LV 3 When this Face up monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, select and destroy 1 monster on the field. If the destroyed monster was a WATER [s]attribute[/s] monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of this card. During your next Standby Phase, you can [b]T[/b]ribute this card to Special Summon 1 Crater Hellion LV 6 from your hand or [b]D[/b]eck to the field. LV 6 During battle between this attacking monster and a DEF position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponents Life [b]P[/b]oints. During your Standby Phase, you can [b]T[/b]ribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Crater Hellion LV8" from your hand or [b]D[/b]eck to the field. LV 8 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Crater Hellion LV6". You can activate this cards effect by paying half your Life [b]P[/b]oints. When this card is destroyed, you can add both "Crater Hellion LV3" and "Crater Hellion LV8" from your Graveyard to your [b]D[/b]eck. Then shuffle your [b]D[/b]eck. *Suggestion for LV 8 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Crater Hellion LV6". When this card is destroyed, you can pay half your Life Points add both "Crater Hellion LV3" and "Crater Hellion LV8" from your Graveyard to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. I liked them, but their balance is not perfect. 7.5/10 with no fixes; 9.5/10 with fixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee-Jaie Posted December 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 I meant to have LV8's effect say "When this card is destroyed, you can add both "Crater Hellion LV3" and "Crater Hellion LV6" not LV8. That was an error. Thanks for the comments though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee-Jaie Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 EDITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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