<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/8130/59945.jpg[/img] lore: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 or more Sea Serpent or Fish-Type Monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. This card's DEF is equal to the number of Monsters you discarded x 500. Once per turn you can have this card lose 500 DEF to negate an effect targeting a Sea Serpent-Type monster on your side of the field. When this card's DEF reaches 0, add one Sea Serpent or Fish-Type monster to from your Graveyard to your hand. Feel free to rate and/or hate (preferrably the former), all advice is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2010 bUmP BuMp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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beefman Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 A great and creative effect! I love the card in general and it puts those useless types to good use! 10/10 and a +1 rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 its pretty good. some OCG errors. Has a good effect but sea sepant monsters and fish monsters are the second and 3rd least used monster in yugioh so it might not have the best effect. I give it a 7/10its pretty good. some OCG errors. Has a good effect but sea sepant monsters and fish monsters are the second and 3rd least used monster in yugioh so it might not have the best effect. I give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 [quote name='poinl' timestamp='1293254064' post='4881894'] its pretty good. some OCG errors. [/quote] like what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 well for one its says to from your graveyard when it should say just from your graveyardIt should also say this card can only be tribute summoned by tributing 3 or more sea serpant and/or fish monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 You should change the OCG from: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 or more Sea Serpent or Fish-Type Monsters from your hand to the graveyard. This card's DEF is equal to the number of Monsters you discarded x 500. Once per turn you can have this card lose 500 DEF to negate an effect targeting a Sea Serpent-Type monster on your side of the field. When this card's DEF reaches 0, add one Sea Serpent or Fish-Type monster to from your graveyard to your hand. to: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 3 or more Sea Serpent or Fish-type Monsters to the Graveyard. This card's DEF is equal to the number of monsters you discarded x 500. Once per turn, you can have this card lose 500 DEF to negate an effect targeting a Sea Serpent-type monster you control (--> you don't say anymore "on your side of the field, in the new OCG"). When this card's DEF is 0, add 1 Sea Serpent or Fish-type monster from your Graveyard to your hand." With the changes I give it a 9.5/10. Until then, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 Thanx 4 feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 [quote name='poinl' timestamp='1293289730' post='4882276'] well for one its says to from your graveyard when it should say just from your graveyard It should also say this card can only be tribute summoned by tributing 3 or more sea serpant and/or fish monsters. [/quote] You are wrong, Tribute Summon is included in the Normal Summon. If it says "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set" you can't Tribute Summon it. This is a Special Summon. That OCG fix you gave was a mistake instead. Just to make things clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 thanks, but do you have a rating or anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 [quote name='tdloe' timestamp='1293293777' post='4882407'] thanks, but do you have a rating or anything? [/quote] I already said. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 Thanx a ton. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myst Posted December 26, 2010 Report Share Posted December 26, 2010 [quote name='Richard Steve' timestamp='1293293484' post='4882401'] You should change the OCG from: This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 or more Sea Serpent or Fish-Type Monsters from your hand to the graveyard. This card's DEF is equal to the number of Monsters you discarded x 500. Once per turn you can have this card lose 500 DEF to negate an effect targeting a Sea Serpent-Type monster on your side of the field. When this card's DEF reaches 0, add one Sea Serpent or Fish-Type monster to from your graveyard to your hand. to: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 3 or more Sea Serpent or Fish-[b]T[/b]ype Monsters to the Graveyard. This card's DEF is equal to the number of monsters you discarded x 500. Once per turn, you can have this card lose 500 DEF to negate an effect targeting a Sea Serpent-[b]T[/b]ype monster you control (--> you don't say anymore "on your side of the field, in the new OCG"). When this card's DEF is 0, add 1 Sea Serpent or Fish-[b]T[/b]ype monster from your Graveyard to your hand." With the changes I give it a 9.5/10. Until then, 9/10. [/quote] Um.. tdloe did those right (the bold ones) and to be honest, you can still use "on your side of the field" coz I use that a lot.. OCG Fix: graveyard -> Graveyard That's about it.. 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted December 26, 2010 Report Share Posted December 26, 2010 Good card, but graveyard = Graveyard. The effect is creative and it has an interesting picture. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2010 Thanks you guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dries965 Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 9/10 Nice effect only i dont like the name of the card, fits more for a spell or trap card, try fiddling with another language Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 [quote name='swordfire206' timestamp='1293340296' post='4883821'] Um.. tdloe did those right (the bold ones) and to be honest, you can still use "on your side of the field" coz I use that a lot.. [/quote] Sorry about the "type - should be Type". I forgot my Caps On that cheers for that. Anyway I said you don't use anymore the "on your side of the field" because in this context is useless and people should get used to the new OCG owning structure. I'm currently analysing OCG with a ton of other people for Konami's new Set ("Storm of Ragnarok") and prepare for some gorgeous new Effects to come, and some awesome Synchros ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted December 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 Thanks for rate and advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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