Dragon Knight

[Jayden Yuki 213]

[img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/7286/334806.jpg[/img]

[Kodamλ]

This is better. Much Better.
OCG fix:
When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap cards on your Opponent's side of the Field
+ it should be 8 star
Rating 6.5/10

[Teh ZWOOTS]

[quote name='BlackFire Dragon' timestamp='1293200992' post='4880092']
This is better. Much Better.
OCG fix:
When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap cards on your Opponent's side of the Field
+ it should be 8 star
Rating 6.5/10
[/quote]
Point out corrections so he knows what his mistakes were. Thank you.

1. I'm pretty sure "Tibute Summoned" is an unnecessary condition. Just say "Normal Summoned".
2. All the movements, phases, etc, need to be capitalized.
Example: Special Summon, Normal Summon, Set, Standby Phase, Battle Phase, Spell Card, Trap Card, Monster Effect
3. There is no such thing as a "Magic Card". Use "Spell Card".
4. When a card refers to itself in its effect, phrase it as:
When this card [effect]

[Monkeymadman]

Also "Hero" is not a real Type.

[Teh ZWOOTS]

[quote name='Monkeymadman' timestamp='1293201667' post='4880130']
Also "Hero" is not a real Type.
[/quote]
This has been mentioned before. He seems to be headstrong on making all of his cards Hero-Type. Also, name a suggestion or two when complaining about fake Types.

[beefman]

If it's a dragon knight, why does it have absolutely nothing to do with dragons?