.Rai Posted December 24, 2010 Report Share Posted December 24, 2010 [center]I've made a separate thread for the brawl's purposes. [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/233612-cursed-reaction-cursed-memoirs-christmas-05/]If you'd like to comment on the rest of my cards, click here.[/url] The cards are not related in any way but the fact they are support and monsters for Exceed Summoning. Also, if for any reason, a picture doesn't appear, it's may be in my other thread. Will update regularly. [spoiler=Flood Cabinet, Nami][IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2cnfvi9.jpg[/IMG] This card is also treated as WATER. The monsters used to Exceed Summon this card must be WATER or DARK. If your opponent declares an attack on a monster you control except this card, you can discard 1 card from your hand to change the target of the attack to this card. You can remove all Overlaid monsters on this card from play to destroy 2 Spell or Trap cards on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Le Pégase][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2w4d0k2.jpg[/IMG] This card is also treated as LIGHT. The monsters used to Exceed Summon this card must be LIGHT. Once per turn, you can show your opponent 2 cards from your hand to place 1 Phase Counter (max. 1) on this card. While there is a Phase Counter on this card, it cannot be targeted for an effect or an attack. During your End Phase, remove all Phase Counters from this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Excessive Destruction][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2lm14hy.jpg[/IMG] Destroy 1 Excess Monster and any Overlaid monsters on it you control. Then, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If there were any Overlaid monsters on the destroyed Excess monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to their total Levels X 400.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Tag Marksman][IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/11mgprk.jpg[/IMG] If this card is used for an Excess Summon, you can Special Summon a “Marksman Token” (Warrior-Type/FIRE/Level 3/ATK 750/DEF 700). The token cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. While this card is Overlaid on an Excess Monster, the Excess Monster gains 500 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dusk de Pride][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/90xdut.jpg[/IMG] This card is also treated as DARK. When this card is Excess Summoned, place 3 Counters (max. 3) on this card. When this card attacks, remove 1 Counter from this card. This card gains the appropriate effects depending on how many Counters are on this card: 0: If there are any Overlaid monsters on this card, remove them from play. • 1: This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each monster on the field. • 2: This card can attack twice during the Battle Phase. • 3: Your opponent takes 1000 damage each time he/she activates a Spell Card.[/spoiler] [spoiler= War Platform][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2zyy0e0.jpg[/IMG] During either player’s Battle Phase, you can Overlay this card on an Excess Monster you control. During your Main Phase, if this card is Overlaid on an Excess Monster you control, remove it from play. Then, draw 1 card and show it to your opponent.[/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 [size="4"][b][i][color="#008000"]Official Review[/color][/i][/b][/size] Nami: This card a little UP for an Excess monster, however, I suppose it could be relatively easy to Excess Summon using WATER monsters but still, there isn't much...'Specialness' to it... Know what I mean? Like...It's not totally creative and it's more of a stall card than anything. It's last effect is ok decent enough. Pegase: Again more of a stall tactic. The "or for attack" isn't needed. Since the phase counter is only in place for your turn, your opponent cant select it as an attack target. Anyways, it makes a good beatstick in LIGHT decks. Destruction: Meh.... Cant really see why I'd play this. Both players get like -3. I guess this could be anti-Excess but =/ idk it just seems....bad? I mean you've already destroyed 1 of your monsters, theres no need to have yourself take 400+ damage for removed Overlays. I'd suggest switching it to just destroying an Excess monster you control and inflicting damage to opponent for each overlaying card x400. That just sounds more useful than having an equilibrium between you and your opponent. Just...In it's current state I wouldn't use it. Tag: This card makes me feel uneasy. I don't think it's OP or broken I just feel it could be abused somehow. Probably for Synchro Summon after it's used for an Excess Summon. Still it's a single token, its nothing big. It's pretty standard. Dusk: This reminds me of B.E.S. I thought it was support at first but no. This is good, it only gets the Counters when it's summoned. W/ 3 your opponent gets burned for 1000 for playing Spells. This might be a little OP. Think: When Caius is Tribute Summoned, he can remove a card from play and if it's DARK, inflict 1000 Damage. This card burn same damage every turn if the opponent uses Spell Cards (which they're almost guaranteed to). This is just Curse of Darkness for Opponent. Its second and first effects are fine. I'm just concerned about the last effect. War: It's ok draw. Not much else to say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 I may change Excessive Destruction. For Dusk, the last effect is more of a Lockdown-type effect. It's basically an Anti-Spell Fragrance/Dark Simorgh combo but with slightly more choice for your opponent in return for damage. Thanks for the comments. EDIT: Changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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