first posts

[Atemschosen1]

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[The White Wolf]

Creativity - 1/5
Effect - 0/10
Type - 0/5
ATK/DEF - 1/10
Name - 3/5
OCG - 0/15
Total - 5/50 = 1/10
Don't worry bout it, you've just started, you'll do better next time (I hope)

[**_Xan_-_-_]

Let me do what the above person did:

Creativity=1/7
Effect=-3/7
Type=-1/7
ATK/DEF=1/17
Name=1/7
Picture=1/7
Title(Misleading or leading By the way im doing this one just for fun)=0/7, You said Hope You like EM i only see one and how is first posts with a S theres only one card

Total=0

[poinl]

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way too many errors and that should be a normal monster.

sorry i give it a 1/10

[Y.M.R.creator]

It's a fail so 1/10

Here are some advices:

1. Spirit Monsters could not be Special Summoned, and are sent back to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn they are Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or flipped face-up. This also happens if they wound up in the opponent's hand via effects like "Exchange"
2.Spirit monster always have an extra effect.Just like gemini, toon, union and tuner.
3.If you're looking for some good pictures: Jazin Kay
4.Spy-monster don't excist.
5.It's DEF is way to high for a monster with 2 tributes.

Good luck making other cards!

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I don't see why somebody negged him because his first post was a bad card. I balanced it out.

Anyway, Y.M.R.creator pretty much summed it up. The only other thing to say is to look at existing cards to figure out grammer so you don't become one of those members who puts up cards that say "This monster is so powerful it destroys 3 cards on the field."

Everything else is learned from experience.