A few cards in need of feedback

[**_Xan_-_-_]

[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/1020/265788f.jpg[/img]-fixed
[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/9273/265788j.jpg[/img]-fixed
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8474/265788va.jpg[/img]-fixed
[img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/9902/265788i.jpg[/img]
Lore:The monster equipped to this card is treated as a union monster with this effect. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can equip the monster currently equipped to this spell card to another monster on the field as an Equip Spell Card. When equipped to a monster increase that monsters ATK and DEF by 600 and each time that monster destroys 1 of your opponents monsters inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponents life points. If that monster is destroyed in battle send this card to the graveyard to keep the equipped monster from getting destroyed and return any monster from the spell/trap zone back onto the monster zone.
[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/5089/265788.jpg[/img]-fixed
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3731/265788y.jpg[/img]-New(Anyway to make the effect better is appreciated)

These are some of the cards in my soon to be finished custom picture set but these cards i think need some fixing plz comment on them the best you can.

[**_Xan_-_-_]

Bump

[Richard Steve]

You need some OCG fixes. Also I'd suggest you to change some Card names.

For Copycat Tribute Summon (yes, not Copy Cat - it's Copycat):
"Pay 1000 Life Points. When your opponent Normal Summons a level 7 or lower monster you can Special Summon 1 monster from your hand with the same level as the summoned monster."

For Ice Land Spy, Insectia - the name is not as suggestive as it should be. Call it Ice Land Insect or you can make it Icefire Insect,
also it is sooooo overpowered!!! Change it to:
"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When you Special Summon this card it is Special Summoned on your opponent's side of the field. The owner of this card must show their hand during each of his/her Main Phases."

For Purple Mist Bandit (yeah, take out the "kileaum" - it makes the name too long and useless). Overpowered as well. Change it to:
Either level 3 ATK/1000 DEF/1000 and:
"When this card attacks a face-down defense position monster, increase this card's ATK by 500."

OR

level 4 ATK/1500 DEF/1200 and:
"This card can attack twice during the same turn. If you do so, change it to defense position at the end of the Damage Step.".

For spirit unity, sorry but the effect doesn't fit here, not going to rate it.

Finally for Volcano Hero, Enfer is so underpowered, poor card if it was real, hehe
If you want it balanced and good I would change it to:

Volcano Master - Enfer
level 7
ATK/2000 DEF/2000

Effect:
"Once per turn you can discard 1 Spell/Trap Card to increase this card's ATK by 400. When this card is destroyed by Battle and sent to the Graveyard return 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to the hand.".

That's all for now, not bad, I like the pics, and the effects are not as bad as it looks like at a first glance (just because of some OCG errors)

I give it a 8/10 and a rep. Good job!

[**_Xan_-_-_]

The only point of the long name is in the set im making but w/e

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

My turn, I'll skip cards I have nothing to say about.

Ice Land Insect - The card has nothing wrong OCG-wise, I just don't really see the point in wasting another card to Special Summon this guy to the opponent's field, and all you get is to see your opponent's hand. Not really good overall.

Spirit Unity - Since it's and Equip Spell, and Equip Spells can only be equipped to monsters, once you equip the monster to another monster, this card is destroyed and the effect is no longer applied. Confusing game mechanic, I'd make it a Continuous Spell Card, have it select a monster, then Special Summon the selected monster back to the field if it's destroyed while the monster is equipped. You also need the parenthesis at the end for union monsters, you can look up that.

Volcano Hero, Enfer - Spellcaster is one word, instead of "/" you can just use "or", and I think the Spell return is OP'd, there was a reason Magician of Faith was banned, too many recycled cards like Monster Reborn or Dark Hole. Mabey if you just returned it to the Deck it would be a little more balanced.

Two for One - Not sure if it's strong or not, mabey a restriction on what you can tribute, like Level 4 or higher mabey? Not sure if I'm right on this one.

Good cards overall, the ones I didn't comment on I couldn't find problems with.