Marcus Cage Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3333/319771z.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore:']This card can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type Monster. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK. Decrease the ATK of all Fire Monsters by 500.[/spoiler] [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/7351/319771b.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore:']This card can only be equipped to a Dark Monster. The monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 700. If the monster equipped with this card is sent to the graveyard by battle, or card effect, discard 1 card from your hand, to send this card back to your deck. Shuffle your deck.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkeymadman Posted December 25, 2010 Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 The first card is lightning blade for FIRE monsters. Try to be more original. when talking about attributes like fire, dark water, say FIRE DARK WATER The second card is okay, but again need to say DARK The OCG is a bit off, you need to say [i]then,[/i] instead of starting a new sentance for shuffle your deck I'm sure someone else will correct your entire OCG, since i'm not a total expert on it/ Overall 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 26, 2010 Report Share Posted December 26, 2010 Protip: Original means cooler. Also, Equip cards are generally terrible unless they're like D.D.R, Supervise, Mark of the Rose, etc... so make your Equip cards strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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