White Void - Hakumen

[Cholenko]

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[b]★★★★★★★★ LIGHT
[Warrior / Effect]
You can Special Summon this card if you removing from play 1 Level 8 monster in your field, if you do, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle and send to the Graveyard, you cand send 1 Level 8 monster from your deck to the Graveyard and Special Summon this card.

ATK/2500 DEF/2300[/b][/center]

[~Duo~]

Cool MSE card. Really outstanding for a two star member. I only found a few small OCG errors. "You can Special Summon this card [b]by[/b] removing from play 1 Level 8 monster [b]on your side of the[/b] field. [b]If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect[/b]" But really creative! Stuff this folder full of Blue Eyes, a REDMD, and Imperial Iron Wall this guy is invincible.
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Ancient Rules or another way, Summon Blue Eyes without Tributing. Summon this guy, get Blue Eyes RFP (I'm not sure if IIW will take him to Graveyard or just null the effect), and if he dies, bring him back with another Blue Eyes, and bring THEM back with REDMD.
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Creative phoenix.

9.5/10

[.:Blu:.]

Correct OCG: This card can be Special Summoned by removing 1 Level 8 monster you control from play. If you do, this card can attack twice during the Battle Phase of this turn. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you cand send 1 Level 8 monster from your deck to the Graveyard and Special Summon this card.

Pretty nice effect, well balanced. Aside from the OCG, I have no problem with this card. 8.5/10

[DARKPLANT RISING]

[b]White Void - Hakumen
★★★★★★★★ LIGHT
[Warrior / Effect]
You can Special Summon this card if you removing from play 1 Level 8 monster in your field, if you do, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle and send to the Graveyard, you cand send 1 Level 8 monster from your deck to the Graveyard and Special Summon this card.

ATK/2500 DEF/2300[/b]

Hmm. I see.

It's LV 8 support, and a LIGHT Warrior as well. Which are good things.

And on top of all there's a Twin. And it can RFP a LV 8 monster from your grave to revive it...if it's destroyed by battle. Wait. Destroyed by battle? WHAT?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Well, this is quite a negative. Most monsters with 2500 or more ATK used these days can destroy it with its effect. Of course the Twin is good, but it only has 2500 ATK. Same ATK as Stardust, with much harder summoning conditions.

Hmm, it's quite underpowered. If its revival activated upon any form of destruction it could have been used for fun. Right now, a bit too weak...

But with newby bouns, 8/10 (+1'ed).

[Cholenko]

[b]Ooh!~ Thanks for the coments!
really appreciate it <3[/b]