Beast of Time

[BlackwingKing24]

[spoiler='Monsters'][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/qz4voo.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/25t7uva.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/292b62b.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/t0szd2.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/t02tz8.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/fe29m8.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2mcumgw.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler][spoiler='Traps'][IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/209sm83.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler]
[spoiler='Main Monster'][IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/29pdq3o.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler]

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OK, really sorry, but this is my opinion: your cards are not good. 3/10
This are negative points, try to improve them:
1. You maked these cards with Magic Set Editor, am I right? Try the normal Card Maker, with Magic Set Editor your cards look fake.
2. I won't set the numbers. for example not "Beast of Time 1 - Primitive Striker", but "Beast of Time 1 - Primitive Striker".
3. Most members makes cards that are overpowered, you, instead, make cards that are underpowered.
4. Your cards are not original.
5. Try to find other images for "Beast of Time 2 - The Jungle Ruler" and "Beast of Time 3 - The Striking Cobra".

Your positive points are:
1. Your OCG is almost correct. But the effect of "Beast of Time 3 - The Striking Cobra" is not so clear.
I would set: When this card attacks, both this and the attack target lose 1000 ATK (permanently).

Better next time

[BlackwingKing24]

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