Gospel. Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 [center][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8742/331207w.jpg[/img][/center] [center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by revealing 2 "Lightsworn" monsters in your hand. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of "Lishtsworn" monsters you control x700. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points to send one "Lightsworn' monster you control from your Deck to the Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field, send the top 5 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.[/center] [center]pretty generic lightsworn effect but w/e[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 1. It's Max. ATK and DEF are 2000, very weak for a monster that level. 2. What happens at the End Phase when you send the Lightsworn to the Graveyard? These are the reasons that this card fails. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 [quote name='~{Rochster}~' timestamp='1293409269' post='4885391'] 1. It's Max. ATK and DEF are 2000, very weak for a monster that level. 2. What happens at the End Phase when you send the Lightsworn to the Graveyard? These are the reasons that this card fails. 4/10 [/quote] Those seem pretty minor. All I need to do is increase the amount of ATk and DEF gained per monster. easy fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 make it reveal 2 LS cards in your hand, your opponent needs to confirm if you have it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
All Around Member Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 llightsworns have a background(except judgement dragon). 8/10you should make it gains 700 or 800 ATK not 400 because it's too weak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 okay. Edited a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 Good job. Nice picture, good effect. 8,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 Better, and I just realized something, when you said "... this card can only be Special Summoned by ..." did you mean "... this card cannot be Special Summoned except by ..." ? New rating: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 [quote name='~{Rochster}~' timestamp='1293490931' post='4888001'] Better, and I just realized something, when you said "... this card can only be Special Summoned by ..." did you mean "... this card cannot be Special Summoned except by ..." ? New rating: 7/10 [/quote] Lol I see people use either one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted December 28, 2010 Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 [center][color=#800080][size=2]"...Can only be Special Summoned by..." Indicates Semi-Nomi.[/size][/color][/center][size="3"][color="#800080"][center]"...Cannot be Special Summoned except by..." Indicates Nomi.[/center][center]Good card all in all, can't really rate right now.[/center][/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 [quote name='Dharc the Dark Charmer' timestamp='1293517042' post='4889103'] [center][color=#800080][size=2]"...Can only be Special Summoned by..." Indicates Semi-Nomi.[/size][/color][/center][size="3"][color="#800080"][center]"...Cannot be Special Summoned except by..." Indicates Nomi.[/center][center]Good card all in all, can't really rate right now.[/center][/color][/size] [/quote] okay. thanks for clarifying? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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