Kale Posted December 28, 2010 Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 [size="2"][center]Welcome! Thank you in advance for viewing my first card in -- erm... -- about a year or two!! Do i still have it going? This card is an Excess Monster, or what i see an Excess Monster becoming. The rules for Excess Summoning are located [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232776-cc-excess-community-brawl/]here.[/url] Here we go! Excess Summon, Level Limit Area Coordinator! [u]Level Limit Area Coordinator[/u] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/21ozvhf.png[/IMG] WIND/Fiend/Excess/Effect/6/2300/1200 When this card is Excess Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your Graveyard. This card's battle position cannot be changed by a card effect. This card's maximum number of attacks this turn is equal to the number of this card's overlaid monsters. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Any damage inflicted to your opponent by this card is halved. [color="#0000FF"][url=http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=warrior#/d2r0sn4]Image Credit[/url][/color] I know image credit isn't required, but it is a habit now. Plus, i appreciate artists for allowing me the opportunity to use their creativity in order to express my own. Please tell me what you think! It's a simple one, but it is just a way to show off Excess Monsters. Plus, it works with a certain pair of cards already in existence! I'd build a deck around a card like this. As always, -Kale. [/center][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 28, 2010 Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 D:!!! Your that one guy from a long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long long time ago o.o.... Anyways that card seems fine. Not sure why you halved it. From what I can tell you tried to have it attack a number of times equal to the number of Overlaid monsters? The way you have it makes it sound as though thats the number of times it can attack by card effect. Could just say "This card can attack a number of times equal to the number of Overlaid monsters. But you could keep it as it is as I get it and OCG doesn't matter unless you cant understand a word. It's fine I suppose but you could simple use Cold Wave and since the highest number of possible attacks this card could ever have is 3 then that could be 3 direct attacks or 2 direct attacks. I think not being able to attack directly would be a better draw back than halving... @.@ Sorry Im dumb. Lol Halving damage means direct damage as well lol. Forget that :3 It's fine as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 Yeah, I am from a long time ago. =] It sucks that the first post commented on the one sentence that I hated trying to word. =\ but that's okay! The only reason I worded it that way is because that's how Shooting Star is worded. I decided to mimic the most recently accepted OCG when i made this. If that makes sense. =\ I also chose to have it halve damage because of its synergy with Level Limit - Area B. =] plus, if it attacks twice at half power nearly always, it'll do it's full power in total damage, thus equalling a direct attack. =] Your suggestion is good too, it's more of a preference thing. I prefer to attack directly if I can, so I wouldn't make a card that couldn't. Thanks for your response! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 28, 2010 Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 [quote name='Kale' timestamp='1293578223' post='4890896'] It sucks that the first post commented on the one sentence that I hated trying to word. =\ but that's okay! The only reason I worded it that way is because that's how Shooting Star is worded. I decided to mimic the most recently accepted OCG when i made this. If that makes sense. =\ [/quote] Lol forget what I said then ^^ lol I just got SSD too so i didnt notice. Leave it as is then cause its not confusing anymore x3. And NP :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 29, 2010 Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 +1 for the Kale. I'm so glad to see your back! Hope to see you in the Fic section again. I don't really see anything wrong with the wording or the card. Would use this card IRL. KIU ~ <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 Thank you, Zero! I appreciate it! Btw, how do you see individual reps given? i'm still trying to get used to this new system... I am glad that you enjoy this monster. =] i tried to make it seem realistic. I have been thinking about writing a new fic... i most likely can. now i just have to come up with an idea.. i'll have to abandon my old story, but i could still keep the characters. anywho, thank you for commenting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 29, 2010 Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 We did have the option to see who gave a rep in the User CP, but it has been disabled for quite some time. The only way to to see who gave you a rep is to go through all your post and click on the green/red number in the bottom right corner of your post. No prob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 [quote name='Legend Zero' timestamp='1293586490' post='4891262'] We did have the option to see who gave a rep in the User CP, but it has been disabled for quite some time. The only way to to see who gave you a rep is to go through all your post and click on the green/red number in the bottom right corner of your post. No prob. [/quote] urgh.. that isn't as cool. We gave that up to change our usernames willy-nilly? Wow... Anywho, i still like that you commented. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 29, 2010 Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 I'm not a Japanese reader, but I have seen a few members do this, so I thought I might ask; you did put Warrior/Excess/Effect, right? [size="1"]Also, wouldn't mind a Member's Card of the Excess variety. Maybe we could work out a trade? A sig from me for a card from you? PM for details.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 [quote name='Legend Zero' timestamp='1293597407' post='4891834'] I'm not a Japanese reader, but I have seen a few members do this, so I thought I might ask; you did put Warrior/Excess/Effect, right? [size="1"]Also, wouldn't mind a Member's Card of the Excess variety. Maybe we could work out a trade? A sig from me for a card from you? PM for details.[/size] [/quote] Yes. I went to [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exceed_Monster]this page of the wiki[/url] and found the exact symbols that they will use. It's just like Synchro, they use the phonetics that will end up sounding like Excess/Exceed/Whatever. =] Funny thing, its actually a Fiend monster, not a warrior. I didn't write that down.... I will edit that right now. [size="1"]And i most likely could make that card for you. A new sig for my return would be so awesome! [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 29, 2010 Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 [quote name='Kale' timestamp='1293597672' post='4891844'] Yes. I went to [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exceed_Monster]this page of the wiki[/url] and found the exact symbols that they will use. It's just like Synchro, they use the phonetics that will end up sounding like Excess/Exceed/Whatever. =] Funny thing, its actually a Fiend monster, not a warrior. I didn't write that down.... I will edit that right now. [size="1"]And i most likely could make that card for you. A new sig for my return would be so awesome! [/size] [/quote] Seriously? I looked at the pic and saw Girl, with sword, and in good shape......I assumed. (and we all know what happens) Also for future reference, most people believe that the more difficult levels of Excess monsters will have quite the broken effects. Although 6 and 8 will remain relatively balanced. [size="1"]Cool, I'll drop you a PM.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 [quote name='Legend Zero' timestamp='1293598598' post='4891868'] Seriously? I looked at the pic and saw Girl, with sword, and in good shape......I assumed. (and we all know what happens) Also for future reference, most people believe that the more difficult levels of Excess monsters will have quite the broken effects. Although 6 and 8 will remain relatively balanced. [size="1"]Cool, I'll drop you a PM.[/size] [/quote] Yeah, sexy girls with swords are always warriors. except mine. gatcha. Yeah. I am planning a level 2. Watchoutt! [size="1"]Nifty, i already replied before i saw this.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2010 A BUMP for goodness? Please, can i get some more reviews? Thank you! -Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 wow. i have never had to bump a thread so often in my existence here. What happened to all the good reviewers? Please tell me what you think. i took valuable time and energy trying to hear what you think. -Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 Well, welcome back to YCM [size="1"]of course, I wasn't here until at least a year after you left, but whatever...[/size] [size="1"] [/size] [size="2"]Anyway, about the card, I think it is a little overpowered...[/size] [size="2"]Unable to do extraordinary damage, but still able to wipe out 2-3 monsters in a row...[/size] [size="2"]I would say at least remove the effect that Summons the Lv.3 or lower monster...[/size] [size="2"]Oh, and I think I read somewhere it will be "Fiend / Excess" instead of "Fiend / Excess / Effect"...Pretty much like the Tuners...[/size] [size="2"] [/size] [size="2"]On the bright side, the picture is really good, and I just <3 the Japanese writing...[/size] [size="2"]It gets an easy 9 / 10 from me! [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 [quote name='Sotos' timestamp='1293720700' post='4895884'] Well, welcome back to YCM [size="1"]of course, I wasn't here until at least a year after you left, but whatever...[/size] [size="1"] [/size] [size="2"]Anyway, about the card, I think it is a little overpowered...[/size] [size="2"]Unable to do extraordinary damage, but still able to wipe out 2-3 monsters in a row...[/size] [size="2"]I would say at least remove the effect that Summons the Lv.3 or lower monster...[/size] [size="2"]Oh, and I think I read somewhere it will be "Fiend / Excess" instead of "Fiend / Excess / Effect"...Pretty much like the Tuners...[/size] [size="2"] [/size] [size="2"]On the bright side, the picture is really good, and I just <3 the Japanese writing...[/size] [size="2"]It gets an easy 9 / 10 from me! [/size] [/quote] thank you for commenting! +rep just because i feel like it. Well, it is a bit powerful. this was my first attempt, and it was okay in my opinion. And is it really just '/Excess'? that doesn't seem right if it has a summon condition, like Rituals need spells to summon, synchros need a tuner, fusions need material, and this needs overlay. But if you read it somewhere, then send me a link. thank you so much for coming in! if you liked this card, please comment on the other 2 in my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 Will do, just not now because I need to get offline for a while... I really am not sure about where I read it, sorry...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img] But I think it's like that. P.S.: Mind if I add you as a friend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 [quote name='Sotos' timestamp='1293721174' post='4895900'] Will do, just not now because I need to get offline for a while... I really am not sure about where I read it, sorry...[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img] But I think it's like that. P.S.: Mind if I add you as a friend? [/quote] its cool. i understand that sort of stuff. ive been around for a while... its alright too. just, if you remember, let me know. not at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 [center][size="6"]EPIC BUMP[/size] that is all. carry on.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 Hhm. Now you've got me hooked on these Excess things... You're as inspiring as ever. Over to the card: Awesome editing From what I know perfect OCG Excellent picture Creative effect P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Wow, two for two, Ursus. Thank you so much for commenting again! I'm glad i have you hooked. your PM now makes sense to me. I love the rating! as i should, right? i'm glad it lives up to your expectations. Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 No problem. I trust you will be making more Excess? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Probably! =D I have to have more sparks of genius first, though.. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 I understand. Well, I'll look forward to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Lord Ursus' timestamp='1293889849' post='4902877'] I understand. Well, I'll look forward to it. [/quote] schweet. anyone else want to comment on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.