My first 2 cards

[SuperDark232]

Mario

[img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/483/338354.jpg[/img]

Goku

[img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/483/338354.jpg[/img]

[Scanty&Kneesocks]

well first off before people attack you for this(I'm new too so I've seen it happen D:). Vanillas are not usually appreciated(vanillas are normal cards with no effects.) unless it's in a pack with other cards WITH effects, gemeni, spell, trap, etc... It's simply because by themselves Vanillas are boring and there's not much you can say about it. So try to make some cards with effects.

Aside from that the cards are in order(except for stats on people[Goku 4*]). Granted that's opinionated). So try to get some effect cards and try to stay away from popular stuff(Mario and Dragon Ball Z; and all similars.) Unless you think you can make something spectacular it's better not trying since people will grade you more harshly simply because they've seen it 1000's of times and have that "Way it should be."

People don't like backgrounds that are simply white[see mario] because it's just plain and feels awkward. If you have a picture that has no background render out that picture and give it a background, or ask someone to do it for you.

In closing 3/10. The cards have nothing you can really judge or grade on but you tried and the card itself was posted correctly and the right information in the right box so it was a good first try. Now that have you tried make something and post it that will shut my mouth .

[Duskmaster13]

[quote name='Scanty&Kneesocks' timestamp='1293646824' post='4893370']
well first off before people attack you for this(I'm new too so I've seen it happen D:). Vanillas are not usually appreciated(vanillas are normal cards with no effects.) unless it's in a pack with other cards WITH effects, gemeni, spell, trap, etc... It's simply because by themselves Vanillas are boring and there's not much you can say about it. So try to make some cards with effects.

Aside from that the cards are in order(except for stats on people[Goku 4*]). Granted that's opinionated). So try to get some effect cards and try to stay away from popular stuff(Mario and Dragon Ball Z; and all similars.) Unless you think you can make something spectacular it's better not trying since people will grade you more harshly simply because they've seen it 1000's of times and have that "Way it should be."

People don't like backgrounds that are simply white[see mario] because it's just plain and feels awkward. If you have a picture that has no background render out that picture and give it a background, or ask someone to do it for you.

In closing 3/10. The cards have nothing you can really judge or grade on but you tried and the card itself was posted correctly and the right information in the right box so it was a good first try. Now that have you tried make something and post it that will shut my mouth .
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This.

Also, typo on Goku, change "lide" for "life". Anyways, 4/10

[Laska05]

Good start, bro. Try making some other cards, i'm new too hahahah

[.GhostRyder]

[quote name='Scanty&Kneesocks' timestamp='1293646824' post='4893370']
well first off before people attack you for this(I'm new too so I've seen it happen D:). Vanillas are not usually appreciated(vanillas are normal cards with no effects.) unless it's in a pack with other cards WITH effects, gemeni, spell, trap, etc... It's simply because by themselves Vanillas are boring and there's not much you can say about it. So try to make some cards with effects.Aside from that the cards are in order(except for stats on people[Goku 4*]). Granted that's opinionated). So try to get some effect cards and try to stay away from popular stuff(Mario and Dragon Ball Z; and all similars.) Unless you think you can make something spectacular it's better not trying since people will grade you more harshly simply because they've seen it 1000's of times and have that "Way it should be."People don't like backgrounds that are simply white[see mario] because it's just plain and feels awkward. If you have a picture that has no background render out that picture and give it a background, or ask someone to do it for you.In closing 3/10. The cards have nothing you can really judge or grade on but you tried and the card itself was posted correctly and the right information in the right box so it was a good first try. Now that have you tried make something and post it that will shut my mouth .
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Nice Wall of text^

OT: If you intend to continue making Vanillas, the I suggest adding some support cards to go with it. If you dont then people will start penalising you with abuse. Also I do think vanillas are good starting points for first steps. Start with some Effect cards and move on from there. Vanillas are hard to perfect.

[Morpice]

They could be better. Try making some support cards... maybe senzu beans? Munchrooms? Flowers, Stars or even coins?