Devious Magician - Dark Card Manipulator

[Flare909]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard when a Spell Card is activated during your Main Phase 2 which makes both players discard card(s) from their hands to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase your opponent selects a card at random from your hand, if the card is a Spell/Trap Card, then Increase this card's ATK by 400 and send the selected card to your opponent's hand, if it is a Monster, then Special Summon it (excluding summoning conditions) to your field.

Made a lot of errors, plz rate and comment.

[Morpice]

You forgot card in your description's first sentence.

[Flare909]

[quote name='Morpice' timestamp='1293671823' post='4894694']
You forgot card in your description's first sentence.
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thanks

[.Corgi]

[quote name='Flare909' timestamp='1293646440' post='4893334']
This cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard when a Spell activates during your Main-Phase 2 which makes both players discard card(s) from their hands to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Standby-Phase your opponent selects a card at random from your hand, if the card is a Spell/Trap, then Increase this card's ATK by 400 and send the selected card to your opponent's hand, if it is a Monster, then Special Summon it (excluding summoning conditions) to your field.
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Spell = Spell Card
Activates = is activated
Main-Phase 2 = Main Phase 2
Standby-Phase = Standby Phase
Spell/Trap = Spell/Trap Card

And it would be better if you cropped the pic in paint/photoshop, so it would fit better.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

It's too strong. There are many cards that cause both players to discard cards, like Card Destruction, Hand Destruction and Dark World Dealings, to name a few. Also, you gave it a Goyo-esque effect on steroids, Imagine using this and suddenly stealing your opponents DAD or Stardust Assault. That with the ATK increas on Spell/Traps is a little much, even if your opponent gets the card to their hand. Put some more restrictions on it, and I say make it Special Summon from the hand or Graveyard, not the Deck.