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[quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1293705277' post='4895649']
I gotta say, your OCG is terrible. I couldn't understand the 2nd card's effect. And the first one is kinda meh

4/10
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The first card is a kinda get round the Egyption God cards by making one monster so powerful it can (hopefully) take out one of the god cards and all of the opponents remaining life points.

The second card is for stalling. Soz I know it's writen bad I need to redo it, didn't realise till you pointed it out. Basicly when a monster on your side of the field is sent to the graveyard you can chose to discard it. then monsters on the opponents side of the field with an attack that is less than 500x the number of monsters in your discard pile cannot attack.
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"The first card is a kinda get round the Egyption God cards by making one monster so powerful it can (hopefully) take out one of the god cards and all of the opponents remaining life points. "
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Sorry, but the Egyptian Gods are incredibly easy to take down right now, and 9000 attack is unbelievably overpowered, even if you have only 1 shot at it.

"The second card is for stalling. Soz I know it's writen bad I need to redo it, didn't realise till you pointed it out. Basicly when a monster on your side of the field is sent to the graveyard you can chose to discard it. then monsters on the opponents side of the field with an attack that is less than 500x the number of monsters in your discard pile cannot attack. "
so basically, every time one of your monsters are destroyed your opponent needs to get even more powerful monsters to be able to attack at all?
And also, no attachments. Look in the tutorials section to learn how to post your cards.
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The only thing worse than making bad cards is saying "oh these are my first cards so they suck". Please, no one ever do that, it makes the ratings even lower.

Back on topic, your OCG is terrible, please DON'T use hyperlinks if you can, and is the first card even a well...?
4/10
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hi,
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