Gilford The Inferno

[-L-]

Hi. I came up with new idea for a monster, that gains effects depending on how many tuners you used for it's Synchro Summon.

However, I'm having trouble with it's OCG.

This is basically the only way I can write it, (I know it's incorrect):


Gilford The Inferno
Synchro/Effect
Level 8
Warrior- Fire
ATK: 2000 Def: 2000

1 or more Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned apply the following effect(s) depending on how many Tuners you used as Synchro Material Monsters.

1- This card gains 1000 ATK.

Up to 2- This card is unaffected by Traps.

Up to 3- Destroy all Monsters your opponents controls.

How would I make it so that the effect would stack? And how would I sort out the First Line, "Depending" is not used right?

[-Griffin]

The lore's understandable, which is the important thing, but I think you would want the bits at the side to say:

[list]
[*]1+
[*]2+
[*]3+
[/list]

Other than that, it feels a bit lackluster. It's rare that people bother with multiple tuners, and at level 8, Stardust and Thought Ruler are available which both dodge traps well anyway. I don't see it getting much play.

[Vector Nightmare]

[quote][b]Gilford The Inferno[/b]
FIRE / Warrior / Synchro
Level 8
ATK: 2000 Def: 2000
1 or more Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned apply the following effect(s) depending on the number of Tuners used as Synchro Material Monsters.
• 1+: This card gains 1000 ATK.
• 2+: This card is unaffected by Traps.
• 3+: Destroy all monsters your opponents controls.[/quote]

That should do it. Personally I think it's rather good, although I might go for something different for the 3 tuner effect, especially since in most cases it won't be worth going through the trouble of using essentially 4 monsters, 3 of which are tuners, just to blow up the opponent's field.

[-L-]

Okay so if its a bit underpowerd, how about:

"3+ Return all cards on your opponents side of the field to the owners decks. "

Does that make it too OP'd now? Will returning to the hand be better?

Oh and how about making it level 9? That might make things easier.

I think the best deck this card would suit would be a Fish Synchro deck, or Formula Monarchs. The amount of low level monsters they use can make a level 9 very easy. Fishborg+Fishborg+Fishborg+Monarch/ 2 Oyster Meisters, makes an instant feild wipe.

But yeh, I understand why it's Underpowered.

[CDDRodrigo]

Return to the deck + LVL 9 makes the card much better.