Laska05 Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 Theese are some cards i've made with love, pain and salami. I would apreciate if you give me some advices and corrections of OCG. And, please rate it. [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/1z4kbo1.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2z9dveu.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2ep1ulz.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2z54qs1.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/9hs6rr.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/20act54.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2nl4c50.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy Posted December 30, 2010 Report Share Posted December 30, 2010 super de duper! i like the effects, i like most of the grammar ("Zombie" monsters should be Zombie-type, faced-up should be face up, magic card should be Spell card) the lores for teh vanillas are also pretty kewl. another problem i have is with the pictures. for the most part, your pictures should be detailed and kewl (look on deviant art for good pics) otherwise you did really awesome! effects: 8/10 great job! Flavor text for teh vanillas: 10/10 pics: 4/10 could be better ocg: 7/10 great job! 29/40 NOOB BONUS! +5 =34/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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