biraj321 Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 [img]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/409/61375.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set, this card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 warrior type monster and 1 rock type monster from your graveyard, as well as paying 1000 life points. When this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove from play 1 'Slizer' you control to negate the effect and destroy the card. During your endphase, if you don't have a machine type monster in your graveyard, this card is destroyed. [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7957/61375p.jpg[/img] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your "VALZOOKA, the Heavily-Armoured Destroyer" as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, when the equipped monster destroys an opponents monster as a result of battle, draw 1 card. If the card drawn is a level 1 monster then increase the equipped card's ATK by 300. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) [img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/409/61375.jpg[/img] 1 Beast-type tuner + "Slizer" + "VALZOOKA, the Heavily-Armoured Destroyer" When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, draw one card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, discard the card you drew. If you cannot, this card is destroyed. During the endphase, you can Special Summon one level 1 monster from your graveyard to return the monsters used for this Synchro Summon. If you activate this effect, return this card to the Extra Deck. Please comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 ocg isnt perfect, pic is blurry, all in all fairly good for first card. 7/10 for first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 [b] You already know the pic is blurry, so pointing it out would be useless, but next time you should really look for better pictures, they make the card more appealing. Also, you should know what to capitalizate in an effect, like: normal summoned should be Normal Summoned, special summoned should be Special Summoned, Warrior-Type, Graveyard, Rock-Type, etc... It's actually not bad for a begginner, but you certainlly have a lot to learn 5/10, it's not bad, but not great either.... [/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 [quote name='biraj321' timestamp='1293812649' post='4899750'] I know the pic is blurry but here is my first card. [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/409/61375.jpg[/img Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by removing from play 1 warrior type monster and 1 rock type monster from your graveyard, as well as paying 1000 life points. When this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can remove from play 1 'Slizer' you control to negate the effect and destroy the card. During your endphase, if you don't have a machine type monster in your graveyard, this card is destroyed. Please comment! [/quote] soz. was pointing out obvious again. try image archives for good pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted December 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 image archives? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bakupenguin Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 yeah. heres a good one. make sure to give credit though for their pictures your using. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/226217-doomed-custom-card-images-v2/page__hl__%2Bpicture+%2Barchive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Updated Pic, so all I have to do is state the website and user for the pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 OCG is ok, but like 5 mistakes, but it's a good card. What's slizer though? It would be interesting if you posted slizer. Anyways, I won't say anything for the pic, but 7/10, +1 for newb bonus. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 I'll get Sizer up there soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Got Slizer up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 4 the unions effect and the synchros material, is Valzooka supposed to be all caps? Cuz it doesnt do that on the actual card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj321 Posted January 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 [quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1294007328' post='4907209'] 4 the unions effect and the synchros material, is Valzooka supposed to be all caps? Cuz it doesnt do that on the actual card [/quote] Oh ya, ill fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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