MJZuprocStudios Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 Okay, so I made my own set after admiring other people's. Anyway, the focus of the set is to wipe out your opponent's field before attacking. I'm pretty sure there are OCG errors and lots of OP'd ness, but I just want to know how to improve them. [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/10-PraetorBeastFrostWyrm.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/19-PraetorBeastChimaera.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/21-PraetorBeastGaia.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/13-PraetorBeastSunDragon.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/11-PraetorBeastStormIdol.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/17-PraetorBeastEruption.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/22-PraetorBeastFairyClan.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/20-PraetorBeastTitan.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/18-PraetorBeastBlizzard.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/16-PraetorBeastHurricane.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/15-PraetorBeastTsunami.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/14-PraetorBeastHellion.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/12-PraetorBeastWarSerpent.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/9-PraetorBeastMaster.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/8-PraetorBeastSkyWatcher.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/7-PraetorBeastInfernoTiger.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/6-PraetorBeastBloodhound.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/5-PraetorBeastSentinel.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/1-PraetorBeast-ArmageddonLord.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/2-PraetorStar.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/3-PraetorJudgment.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/4-ObeliskoftheBeast.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/28-BeastlyMight.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/27-PraetorRitual.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/26-PraetorTotem.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/25-ChargingForce.jpg[/img] [img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/24-AncientBeastTrap.jpg[/img][img]http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/ab167/MJZuproc/23-ReleasingthePraetor.jpg[/img] There they are. Please rate, comment, critique, etc. Credit to JazinKay for the pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**_Xan_-_-_ Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 I dont like fixing ocg without lore cuz i have to keep scrolling up and down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schrödinger Posted December 31, 2010 Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 A quick glance shows that some of these cards are a bit broken, especially the spells and traps. A small OCG error I noticed was that you wrote "you may" instead of "you can". I'm not really an expert at it so I might be wrong, but those were my first impressions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJZuprocStudios Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Gunnybear' timestamp='1293839714' post='4901537'] A quick glance shows that some of these cards are a bit broken, especially the spells and traps. A small OCG error I noticed was that you wrote "you may" instead of "you can". I'm not really an expert at it so I might be wrong, but those were my first impressions [/quote] Yeah, I figured the Spells and Traps were broken. I'm gonna start working on them tomorrow or something. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 They are actually...pretty good for a newbie. Maybe put them in spoilers so people can read them better. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ciofy^ Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 titan is a duel master card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJZuprocStudios Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Ciofy^' timestamp='1293912182' post='4903825'] titan is a duel master card [/quote] Really? I didn't know that... Course I don't know anything about Duel Masters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 For a newbie, noob or whatever they called you, this is actually quite good, not overly amazing but great for a new member, trust me since half of the post in finished sets are filled with new member that post really stupid and just plain awful cards and yours beat the s*** out of them. The monsters are not all the way broken but here's some you may wanted to fix. "[b]Praetor Beast Frost Wyrm[/b]" has a pretty cool effect, which is to double the damage your opponent receive. This is pretty op(over powered) since that all battle damage will be double. This means that all battle damage your opponent receive which may or may not involve this card destroying any other monster your opponent control would be double. Although loosing 1000 Life Points maybe very balancing but since all monster you control can inflict double damage, it seems pretty op. So you might change it to "While this card battle a monster your opponent control, double the damage your opponent would receive. Each Time during your Standby Phase, pay 1000 Life Points or destroy this card." "[b]Praetor Beast Chimera[/b]" should be a beats-type and the fusion material either should be specific or just tone it down a little since it seem pretty easy to summon it because you can just send 3 level 4 or lower "Praetor Beast" monster and summon a Level 8 monster with 4000 ATK which I don't really know if it's op or not since it losses 1000 for each monster your opponent control. Other than that, is just bunch of small ocg errors like you may which should be you can. The Spell and Trap are alright enough to pass. Don't know what's so broken about them but yeah I'm not more expert than your are but it's only fair if your opponent get the drawings(drawing of cards) since their card is destroyed because it's seem like Christmas if you destroy someone's card and gets some extra gifts. so yeah...there you go man. So if I'm to rate them it's either a 7 or 7.5/10 for me. I'll expect more good thing in future from you I hope so that the finish set section won't get full of joke cards. and to MJZuprocStudios, nobody cares if it's duel masters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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