D-Generator Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/432/290956d.jpg[/img] Feel free to tell me if they need any changes [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6043/290956u.jpg[/img][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8746/290956s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8243/290956i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7325/290956v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8246/290956w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6460/290956.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow-Master Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 9/10 Great OCG, idea, and concept. My critiques, however, would be that you shouldn't put "Sea Serpent" or "Rock" as the types of the monsters. Those types don't exist the Yugioh world. There also shouldn't be an extra space after each type. Also, since there are so many cards, it makes it kind of hard to choose from when you are selecting these monsters. There are so many you can pick, yet only 3 ritual spell cards to summon those cards. Everything else is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Shadow-Master' timestamp='1293844184' post='4901694'] 9/10 Great OCG, idea, and concept. My critiques, however, would be that you shouldn't put "Sea Serpent" or "Rock" as the types of the monsters. Those types don't exist the Yugioh world. There also shouldn't be an extra space after each type. Also, since there are so many cards, it makes it kind of hard to choose from when you are selecting these monsters. There are so many you can pick, yet only 3 ritual spell cards to summon those cards. Everything else is fine. [/quote] Sorry to butt in like this but I'm afraid that "Sea-Serpent" and "Rock" are in fact valid types (although rather forgotten) http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Type Just thought you ought to know as you are critiquing other people's cards.[quote name='bored00012' timestamp='1293842680' post='4901642'] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/432/290956d.jpg[/img] Feel free to tell me if they need any changes [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6043/290956u.jpg[/img][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8746/290956s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8243/290956i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7325/290956v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8246/290956w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6460/290956.jpg[/img] [/quote] I like the concept. I like the idea of one ritual spell card acting as a portal to summon the various elemental monsters. I fear however that there lies a small OP quality to your cards, for instance "Guradian Spirit of Earth" which can destroy 1 monster per turn, which is a slightly weakened form of XYZ, but what makes it more potent is the fact that it is a ritual summon. However they are only SLIGHTLY OP'd IMO, ATK/DEF if also a contributing factor too . I think a quick review and a bit of thought may help you to produce a very slightly more balanced set of cards, however I like the idea, invention and inituative, the images do the cards a great service and they create a unique elemental feel for each card. Give them a quick look over and make some slight changes woule be my advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.