YGOTASrules Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/5638/339474.jpg[/img] this card is my first monster: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 face-up Dragon-type monsters you control, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle, this card cannot be effected by the effects of you'r opponent's spell cards, if this card destroys a monster as a result of battle discard 1 card from you'r hand, if not you take damage equal to half of that monster's ATK, once per turn you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 you'r opponent's face-up monsters, if you activate this effect this card cannot attack. ________________________________________________ spells: [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/5638/339474.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5638/339474.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurisu23 Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 I like them. The spell card looks like it has the monster card in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YGOTASrules Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Somebody post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Weak. The monster's too hard to summon and it's effect doesn't make it up for that. Your OCG's bad too... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Pretty good for a first few cards but you need some periods in darkness dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Your OCG is not good (but you are new, so OK). The only thing that would make me kill myself is "you'r". But I like your creativity, but it seems the effects are way OP. Keep trying. 3//10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 You'r = Your Dragon-type = Dragon-Type Nice first cards. I've seen many worse first cards, but theese are pretty good. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YGOTASrules Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Cool, but i need to know whats wrong with the OCG can you tell me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Before: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 face-up Dragon-type monsters you control, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle, this card cannot be effected by the effects of you'r opponent's spell cards, if this card destroys a monster as a result of battle discard 1 card from you'r hand, if not you take damage equal to half of that monster's ATK, once per turn you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 you'r opponent's face-up monsters, if you activate this effect this card cannot attack. I think it should be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 face-up Dragon-type monsters you control. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. This card is not effected by your opponent's spell cards. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle discard, 1 card from your hand. If you cannot, you take damage equal to half of that monster's ATK. Once per turn you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 of your opponent's face-up monsters. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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