War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Hello everyone. I decided to join the Excess Community. So I've made some Excess Monsters with Excess Support. I think I've succeeded in my goal, combining Excess, Swordcaster and Warrior Support at the time ( ) So here they come, welcome the Swordcasters ! ! ! [size="5"]Please, only post here useful comments, rates or if you are judging for the Excess Community. Don't ask questions about excess and don't say only "good cards","I liked it".[/size] [spoiler=Megumi, The Swordcaster Priestess] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2484/56865j.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Overlaid on a Level 8 Excess Monster, you can send this card to the Graveyard to destroy up to 2 cards on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Kohnan, The Swordcaster Knight] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4867/56865x.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card attacks an opponent's monster, it gains 300 ATK during the Damage Step only. While this card is Overlaid on a Excess Monster, that monster gains 400 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Luciano, The Swordcaster Paladin] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5543/56865o.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card was Exceed Summoned by Tributing Warrior-Type monsters, destroy 1 monster on the field. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Swordcasting Excessive Machine ] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4289/56865y.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can send 1 Overlaid monster on this card to the Graveyard to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent and draw 1 card. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Von-Khrum, The Swordcaster Fiend] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5563/56865g.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card would be Excess Summoned, the Tributes must be Warrior-Type monsters. When this card is Special Summoned, Overlay 1 monster from your Graveyard on it. This card is unaffected by Trap Cards while that monster is Overlaid on this card. When this card destroys a monster by battle, its controller takes 400 damage.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Swordcasting Talisman] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/5563/56865g.jpg[/img] Lore: You can only equip this card to a Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster. The equipped monster is treated as an Excess Monster and gains 1000 ATK and DEF. During your Standby Phase, pay 1000 Life Points or destroy this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Sword Tower] [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/8504/56865u.jpg[/img] Lore: All Warrior-Type monsters gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can pay 2000 Life Points to Overlay 1 monster from your Graveyard on a Excess monster. Neither player can gain Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Phoenixian Sword of Glory] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/5543/56865o.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only when a Excess monster attacks. Equip this card to it. It gains 300 ATK and DEF. When it destroys a monster by battle, inflict 300 damage to your opponent.[/spoiler] I know that my cards are not perfectly balanced, but at least they have good OCG. And any mistakes, you are more than welcome to fix. Thanks for viewing, judge, fix, rate and comment. I hope the Excess Community judges to view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y.M.R.creator Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 i like the cards, but I still have no idee what excess-summon is and who came up with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WildVengeance Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Y.M.R.creator' timestamp='1293908240' post='4903662'] i like the cards, but I still have no idee what excess-summon is and who came up with it. [/quote] excess summon is coming out in the new yugioh series they haven't actually been released yet http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232776-cc-excess-community-brawl-♥lovely-chan♥-taking-over-judging-due-to-real-life-situations/ check it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Y.M.R.creator' timestamp='1293908240' post='4903662'] i like the cards, but I still have no idee what excess-summon is and who came up with it. [/quote] The Excess Monsters are coming in a new yugioh anime called ZEXAL, you can find this on the Yugioh Wikia. And thanks for the comment, but could you rate them ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y.M.R.creator Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='War Chess' timestamp='1293909392' post='4903719'] The Excess Monsters are coming in a new yugioh anime called ZEXAL, you can find this on the Yugioh Wikia. And thanks for the comment, but could you rate them ? [/quote] Sure I can They're very nice. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Thanks for the rating ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Hhm. A very nice set, this. The monsters could, however be added with a slight tweak to make them sligtly more interesting. As they are now, most of the monsters have effects I've seen before. The images are, however great, and your OCG is splendid. O. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Lord Ursus' timestamp='1293914045' post='4903891'] Hhm. A very nice set, this. The monsters could, however be added with a slight tweak to make them sligtly more interesting. As they are now, most of the monsters have effects I've seen before. The images are, however great, and your OCG is splendid. O. [/quote] Thanks. I have not much effect creativity, as you've seen, but I loved your commentary about my OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Creativity comes with variety and practice. I'm one of the veterans from 2007. Nice to see you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='Lord Ursus' timestamp='1293914261' post='4903902'] Creativity comes with variety and practice. I'm one of the veterans from 2007. [/quote] What do you mean with veteran from 2007 ? And how could my effects be more creative ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 I mean I'm one of those members to have spent quite a long time here. Try making silly, crazy effects and experiment with parts of the game in unexpected ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 OK, thanks. But now lets wait for the Excess Community to judge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1 Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 what is the new yu-gi-oh show they are make's name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 [quote name='tmana jama' timestamp='1293914633' post='4903921'] what is the new yu-gi-oh show they are make's name? [/quote] ZEXAL. But please, ask this somewhere else. Unless you will judge, don't post here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Bumping. Come on ! Where is everybody ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 [size="4"][color="#008000"][b][i]Official Review[/i][/b][/color][/size] Megumi: This card is pretty bland. Not really playable. Within this set, it has no use except using the Tower and Luciano. This being Level 3 and it's effect only activating while it's Overlaying a Level 8, this card won't be used much unless good Overlay support is made. Kohnan: Standard effect, with standard boost. Nothing special, it's effect can be used for beatsticking purposes. Luciano: Pretty standard. The Junk Destroyer of Excess I suppose, only not really powerful. Good anti-stall (piercing damage) but that's about. Machine: Good burn. The draw may be overdoing it but not OP. It's similar to Caius only Caius gives field advantage. This card is decent. Fiend: It's Overlay effect is decent. Could have been combined with Megumi if Megumi could gain her effect being Overlaid on a Level 9 too. It's last effect, you may have done this unintentionally, deals you damage which is troublesome. To have your opponent take the damage, it should be "that card's controller" not "its controller". It's still like your other cards though. Talisman: Not sure why there is such a cost for treating a monster as an Excess Monster. I'm not quite sure why you'd want to. Being treated as an Excess wouldn't matter, if it would be destroyed it's just destroyed, since it has no Overlays it's useless. The 1000 ATK gain shouldn't require 1000 LP to maintain. I could just use Axe of Despair. Tower: Meh. Boost could be more significant, and the LP gain feels random. I don't think it should cost 2000 LP to Overlay from the Graveyard. I wouldn't pay that. Solemn is a worthy LP pay, this doesn't have that strong of an effect. UP. Sword: The increase is insignificant. I could just use Shrink, Forbidden Holy Lance, Forbidden Chalice, ect. The burn isn't very good either. Both could be boosted for more significance. It's a set thats not bad but not that good. It could use work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Thanks lovely. This was like a blind shot. Wasn't expecting anything XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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