*Splurge*

[.:Black Rose:.]

Another random card I made.

[img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/1633/322977o.jpg[/img]
Lore: This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. You can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Torpedo Squid Token" (Machine-Type/WATER/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 0) in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can tribute 2 "Torpedo Squid Tokens" to activate 1 of the following effects:
-Inflict 800 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points
-Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 until the End Phase
-Look at your opponent's hand, then select and remove from play 1 card in your opponent's hand
-Destroy 1 card on the field and send it to the Graveyard

Also, a little something:
[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2d029c.jpg[/IMG]

Image credit to Jazin Kay

[War Chess]

OCG Fix :
[b]T[/b]ribute
Inflict 800 [s]points of Direct [/s]Damage to your opponent[s]'s Life Points[/s]
Look at your opponent's hand, then select and remove from play 1 card in [s]your opponent's hand[/s] it (This one is just to avoid the repetition of words)

Also, you can say only : 1-
2-
Instead if 1 token-
2 tokens-

I think its balanced, but the 2nd effect is a little OP for only 2 tokens (discard 2 cards and hit the opponent directly with 1600)
Anyway, I liked the effect as it is not simple.

8/10

[chedbonlahor]

I like the card it ticks all of my boxes.

Fantastic Image good name even a token in there for good measure, well done. I especially like the concept of its varied effects but I feel you may have got the ballance slightly wrong in terms of the use of the tokens. I think that the 4 possible outcomes are more or less equal in terms of power and IMO should all require an identical cost; I would say perhaps 2 tokens to select an effect. Although I think that on the mostpart the effects work well I just have one small quiery and thats with the effect that increases the ATK by 1000. I think that using this effect and giving it 1600 ATK may be bordering into the OP'd section, however in order to do this you have to discard 2 cards and there is a chance in those two turns it would be obliterated so I'm in a grey zone as far as that's concerned.

Again it's a great card everything seems to fit together nicely I like the feel of the card so its a thumbs up from me.

[beefman]

I think that is a cool card! Creative effects and a weird name! *Splurge*
9/10

[.:Black Rose:.]

EDIT: Changed the effect to equal tribute costs

[War Chess]

Now it got OP and UP.
I don't know, its weired now.
The previous way was weired but less weired.

Anyway, its still cool.

[chedbonlahor]

[quote name='MysteryBanjoMan' timestamp='1293989139' post='4906288']
EDIT: Changed the effect to equal tribute costs
[/quote]

I see you took my advice lol it's a great card.

[.:Black Rose:.]

Thank You!

[.:Black Rose:.]

bump

[.:Black Rose:.]

Bump

[Y.M.R.creator]

Amazing card
How did you make that token?

9/10

[.:Black Rose:.]

Thanks! And about the token:
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/186536-how-to-make-tokens-updated-to-version-11/