SpessMahreens Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Unnamed Fire Deck- [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7351/298297.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7351/298297.jpg[/img] Machine Revolution- [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7351/298297.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1223/298297t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7351/298297.jpg[/img] So how are they? I have alot more that I'll upload soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [b]Warrior of the Red Dragon[/b]: Overpowered. If it's destroyed by any means, you can potentially get 5 new strong monsters. You could make it like this: "When this card is destroyed in Battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon up to 2 Level 5 or lower FIRE monsters from your Graveyard. [b]Magma-Angel[/b]: This card's balanced, but there are minor OCG errors. I'll correct 'em: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Warrior of the Red Dragon" from your hand or Deck in Attack Position. [b]Mech AV Cannon Soldier [/b]and[b] Mech AV Sky Soldier[/b]: Well, unless they play a big part on the strategy, they're not good, cuz they are weak vanilla monsters. You could make 'em 1900 ATK beatsticks or add some effects. [b]Mecha Dragon Lord[/b]: You should also add some effects to this card too. Make it immune to Spells and Traps, for example. All in all, good cards, and since they are your first ones, you deserve a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpessMahreens Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Thanks! I have alot more Machine-Types for that deck, and I plan to upload the rest soon. The AV-Soldiers play a major part in the strategy. But when used outside of the theme they are basically just good low level monsters. I wanted some without effects. They are the weakest of a thirty card AV-*insert name here* Set of cards and those are the weaker ones. Here's some more. Machine World- [img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/7351/298297.jpg[/img] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7351/298297.jpg[/img] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/755/298297h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/7351/298297.jpg[/img] [img]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/7351/298297.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**_Xan_-_-_ Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 For your fuison use Quote marks for monsters name and next time just edit your 1'st post DO NOT do what you just did and add cards in your reply. BTW effects monsters NEED AN EFFECT your component of 3 part monster is not a effect change it to vanilla plz and btw union is a monster that can equip it self to another monster like a equip spell card and gives a certain boost. plz do not try monsters like union or spirit when you clearly dont understand there consept and again for your mech spide cannon use quote marks for monster name and you do not need to add bonus in the efect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpessMahreens Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [quote name='warriorx5' timestamp='1293987983' post='4906219'] For your fuison use Quote marks for monsters name and next time just edit your 1'st post DO NOT do what you just did and add cards in your reply. BTW effects monsters NEED AN EFFECT your component of 3 part monster is not a effect change it to vanilla plz and btw union is a monster that can equip it self to another monster like a equip spell card and gives a certain boost. plz do not try monsters like union or spirit when you clearly dont understand there consept and again for your mech spide cannon use quote marks for monster name and you do not need to add bonus in the efect. [/quote] Okay, The XYZ Dragon Cannon pieces messed me up, I wasn't sure if that was what Union Monsters were. They were actually normal Monsters until a few minutes before I posted. I think I understand Union Monsters now, I'll make a card and tell me if it's right. Another Fire- [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2972/298297b.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 ^^Yes, and you can find an edit button at the bottom of the post.^^ All in all, good cards for a new member. Some OCG errors, but you'll learn with time. Nice pics as well. 6/10, keep making cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpessMahreens Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [quote name='>>Å˜Ã„Ä Ä’<<' timestamp='1293988487' post='4906256'] ^^Yes, and you can find an edit button at the bottom of the post.^^ All in all, good cards for a new member. Some OCG errors, but you'll learn with time. Nice pics as well. 6/10, keep making cards [/quote] Thanks! I have been reading tutorials and looking at some good card makers before making any I thought were worth uploading. One of my favorite cards I've made- [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/7351/298297.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [quote name='SpessMahreens' timestamp='1293988828' post='4906277'] Thanks! I have been reading tutorials and looking at some good card makers before making any I thought were worth uploading. [/quote] You're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 I'll be brief here, Warrior of the Red Dragon is still OP's since you can get 5 monsters, limit the number or lower the level requirements. Also, your Unions aren't actually Unions, if you want them to be you have to do the whole Union effect seen on monsters like Y-Dragon Cannon and Z-Metal Tank, otherwise they need to be Vanillas. The only OCG problem I see (big ones at least) is on Mecha Dragon Lord. It should say, "If Machine World is not on the field, destroy this card." That said, it's UP'd, give it some other effect to give it some kind of advantage other than being a beatstick, I'd probably add that it cannot be targeted by Spells and Traps, making it immune to things like Tribute to the Doomed or Sakuretsu Armor, but still vunerable to Mirror Force and all monster effects, then It'd probably get a lot of play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpessMahreens Posted January 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 I plan on making it immune to all Monster Effects that would destroy it, aswell as Spells and Traps. I'll fix the cards by tommorow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Another suggestion: put the cards in spoilers, that way people will be able to see them easier. Spoilers can be found in the "other styles" tab when you're posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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