Some Cards I Made

[angusja2]

[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1008/3602w.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2168/210805.jpg[/img] [Image Credit -- .Buddha]
[img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/9098/3602.jpg[/img] [Image Credit -- .Buddha]
[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6426/3602b.jpg[/img] [Image Credit -- So Legit You Quit]
[spoiler=Lore]"Technical Golem" + "Engineer Knight"
This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above materials (not by "Polymerization".) This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned, and cannot be declared an attack target during the turn it is summoned. If this card is destroyed, search your Graveyard for a Machine-type monster and add it to your hand.[/spoiler]
OCG fixes appreciated. Tell me what I can improve.
And I know the first card's picture is epic.

[~>Grovyle<~]

coolio

[**_Xan_-_-_]

Did you say OCG FIXING? ok lets see:

Card 1 fix-When this card is played any monster on the field cannot have their ATK and DEF increased or decreased for 5 turns.
BTW i removed the remove from play effect.

Card 2 fix-If this card was sent to the graveyard for a Synchro summon of a Machine-Type Synchro monster, draw 1 card from your deck.
Not so sure if this is correct tho.

Card3 fix-Nothing i found except period after the last bracket im pretty sure of it.

Card4-"Technical Golem" + "Engineer Knight"
This card can only be Fusion Summoned by removing from play the above materials (not by "Polymerization".) This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned, and cannot be declared an attack target during the turn it is summoned. If this card is destroyed, search your Graveyard for a Machine-type monster and add it to your hand.
Fix-This card can only be Fusion SUmmoned by removing from play the above materials (not by "Polymerization"). This card cannot attack the turn it is summoned, and cannot be chosen as an attack target during the turn it is summoned. If this card is destroyed, search your graveyard for a Machine-Type monster and add it to your hand.
Effect seems useless cuz on the turn it is summoned it is YOUR TURN and you mentioned cannot be targeted the turn it is summoned which is useless cuz your opponent cannot attack during YOUR turn.