CallMDel Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3786/166644b.jpg[/img][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4046/166644p.jpg[/img][img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/6714/166644.jpg[/img][img]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/6714/166644.jpg[/img] I donno if you guys think so too but i think theyre discription is cool. Soo thanks to Valina King. I Changed (meh i just copied) the discription of "Eternal Earth Dragon" My English grammer isnt very good because i'm not fond of English especially not using the language everyday in hongkong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 They're totally OP. Except the Living Lava Graven. I liked the stories, they're nice. The most OP of all is Eternal Earth Dragon, 7000 DEF ? 7.8/10 Keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 You need to work on your descriptions, make sure the english you use is clear concise and descriptive. Your pictures are very good (I have used the dragon pic myself for an effect card) but eternal earth dragon is simply OP'd....7000 DEF?? You may need to rethink that, if you don't mind I am going to take your description of Eternal Earth Dragon and put my stamp on it. I want to be clear that no one is right or wrong when writing descriptions as everyone is different, but some can produce more inspired descriptions than others, it's all about expanding your imagination. So here I go: Since the beginning of time this beast has served as the guardian of our world, his titanic frame quakes the ground beneath him with every onerous step. Some say this beast it the ultimate ode to the eternal will of life and nature. You see how it's not too far from yours but slightly more polished. I hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 [b]Okay, the pictures and the descriptions are excellent, but 7000 DEF? It's way too overpowered. By the way, I don't think you can make a Vanilla with more than 3000 ATK Points (although I've done it before).[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CallMDel Posted January 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Thanks for all your comments i appreciated and i would recall corrections you've all made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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