Yang Xiao-Long Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 I've made 7 Excess Monsters, one for each attribute. They are re-vamped versions of certain monsters basically. THEY ARE ALL LEVEL 12. Also, they are most likely OPed. The last card is a DIVINE. I have given you fair warning. Let's get on with the cards shall we? Read the story first if you want. [spoiler='Story'] (Idea from tdloe) They say that 7 monsters, who wished to better serve their duelists, one day came across an ancient tablet at early dawn. Upon the full rise of the sun, the tablet shone with the brightest light, and from there emerged the 3 Egyptian Gods themselves! "We have heard your plights," started Obelisk. "And we have decided to grant each of you one wish," continued Slifer. "What is it that you seven desire?" finished Ra. [/spoiler] [center] [spoiler='Honest, the Brightness of All - Excessive Light'] [i]"I wish to be the brightest virtue, to let others know what one can do when one is honest."[/i] - Honest [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2594/188800.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 700 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your hand or Graveyard, and only after "Honest" is destroyed by battle. During your Main Phase, you can Overlay 1 monster from your hand to this card. (The Level of the Overlaid Monster does not have to equal the Level of other Overlaid Monsters). During either player's Battle Phase, when a face-up LIGHT monster you control battles, you can send 1 Overlaid Monster from this card to the Graveyard to have that monster gain ATK equal to the ATK of the monster it is battling, until the End Phase. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can remove this card from play to increase the ATK of 1 LIGHT monster on your field equal to the number of cards used for this card's Excess Summon x700 (permanently).[/spoiler] [spoiler='Flamvell Grunika - Excessive Burn'] [i]"I simply wish to be in control of the hottest fires ever known."[/i] - Flamvell Grunika [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9949/188800p.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 500 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your hand or Graveyard, and only after "Flamvell Grunika" is destroyed by battle. This card's original DEF is treated as 200 while you control a face-up "Flamvell" monster. Any Battle Damage this card inflicts becomes 0. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's Level x 400. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the removed monster x 300. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to return this card to the bottom of your Deck. Shuffle the Deck afterwards.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Daedalus, Lord of the Deep - Excessive Destruction'] [i]"I wish for the power to control destruction, without destroying my home."[/i] - Ocean Dragon Lord - Neo Daedalus [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/3928/188800u.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 500 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your hand or Deck, and only after "Ocean Dragon Lord - Neo Daedalus" is removed from the field by an opponent's card effect. Once per turn, as long as "Umi" remains face-up on the field, you can send 1 Overlaid Monster from this card to the Graveyard to destroy all cards on the field, except this card and its Overlaid Monsters, and "Umi". If there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to remove this card from play to return all the monsters used for this card's Excess Summon back to their respective player's Deck. Both Decks are then shuffled.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Stardust Hurracan - Excessive Tempest'] [i]"I wish for the power to control even the mightiest of storms, to protect my allies."[/i] - Stardust Dragon [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/2020/188800v.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 700 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your hand or Deck, and only after "Stardust Dragon" is sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect. You can remove this card from play to negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that targets a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card. (This card's Overlaid Monsters remain on the field, but are treated as removed from play). If you negate an effect this way, you can Special Summon this removed from play card during the End Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase I, you can remove from play 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to destroy all non-WIND monsters on the field. This effect cannot be negated. If you activate this effect, you cannot conduct your Battle Phase. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to send this card to the Graveyard to add all of your removed from play cards to the Deck. Shuffle the Deck afterwards.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Machine King, the Ruler - Excessive Monarchy'] [i]"I wish to rule all with an iron fist, and all without a throne to entitle me."[/i] - Machine King [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/2594/188800.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 500 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your Deck or Graveyard, and only after "Machine King" is removed from the field by an opponent's card effect. This card gains 300 ATK for every Machine-Type Overlaid Monster on it. Once per turn, during your Draw Phase, you can remove from play 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to destroy all non Machine-Type monsters on the field, except this card's Overlaid Monsters. This card cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 2 Level 6 or lower Machine-Type Monsters from your Graveyard (except "Machine King").[/spoiler] [spoiler='Sinister Dragon Archfiend - Excessive Corruption'] [i]"I wish for more power over the darkness."[/i] - Red Dragon Archfiend [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/2594/188800.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 600 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your Graveyard or when it is removed from play, and only after "Red Dragon Archfiend" is removed from the field. If this card declares an attack on a Defense Position monster your opponent controls, destroy all other monsters on the field that had the same position after damage calculation. During your End Phase, destroy all other monsters on the field that did not declare an attack this turn. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the removed monster's ATK. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this effect is activated. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to place this card on the bottom of your Deck. Shuffle the Deck afterwards.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Divine End Dragon - Excessive Ultimatum'] [i]"I wish to achieve divinity, no matter the cost"[/i] - Light or Dark End Dragon [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1983/188800i.jpg[/img] Lore: Monsters used for this card's Excess Summon can come from either player's field. You take 1000 damage for every Overlaid Monster that originated from your opponent's field. This card can only be Excess Summoned from your Deck, and only after either "Light End Dragon" or "Dark End Dragon" is destroyed by battle and you take 1000 or more damage. This card can attack all monsters on your opponent's field once each. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase, you can send 1 of this card's Overlaid Monsters to the Graveyard to have this card lose 1000 ATK and DEF (permanently) to send all monsters your opponent controls to the Graveyard, or have this card lose 2000 ATK and DEF, until the End Phase, to decrease the ATK and DEF of the monster it is battling by 2000. When there are no Overlaid Monsters remaining on this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to remove this card from play to add all cards in your Graveyard to your Deck. Shuffle the Deck afterwards.[/spoiler] [/center] So yeah. I realize the stories might be a bit corny. Constructive criticism is welcome. Rates and comments appreciated as well, but you must give a reason for your rate. If you give a rate but no reason behind it, I will report you. Enough of me talking your ear off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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