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Arcadia Reborn - Project BOC X


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Hello I hope you enjoy my fanfic.
[spoiler=Prolouge]
When the Arcadia Movement was destroyed, hordes of psychic duelist were stranded, no leader, no group, and most had no homes. Two leaders rose up, Miren  Fuhu and Ules Chu. Both were powerful duelists, and psychics. Merin created the Neo Arcadia, while Ules made the Pheonix Movement. The two groups coexisted peacefully, until one day, on the anniversary of the Arcadia movements destruction, a street duel broke out. Both particapents were high ranking members of opposite groups. The psychic powers unleashed that day, killed both duelists. No one knew who started the duel, and both groups blamed eachother. Both embarked on projects to destroy the other group. Thus, project BOC X.
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[spoiler=Chapter 1]
Hello, I will not reveal my name, though I assure you I was present at all  events that took place. Without further ado, "Mr. Fuhu, a duelist is here to see you." That was Miren's personal assistant, Alis Cham. Miren himself was staring out the window at a skyscraper with look of intense hatred. Alis said somthing to the duelist, the duelist said something to Alis, causing her eyes to widen. "She says she knows of the project, and can help." Miren's eyes darted towards the door and said "Alis, let her in, this project must be completed." The door opened, and in walked a woman dressed in a black skirt with orange markings on her top, she had black hair down to her shoulders. "I serve a power that can grant your wishes, duel their servants and they might find you worthy to seek their help." Miren's face turned chalk white, then blood red "You killed my leader once... Mrs. Carly Carmine!"[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Charecter Idea App]
Name:
Age:
Appearance(description or picture):
Gender:
Group(Duelist, Rouge Psychic, Neo Psychic, Pheonix Psychic):
Rank(only for Pheonix or Neo Psychics):
Deck(if decklist put in spoiler):
Duel Spirit(optional):
D-Wheel(optional):
Personality(optional but reccomended):
Bio(can be short):
Other:
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[spoiler=Example App]
Name:
Age:
Appearance(description or picture):[img]http://www.urbanministry.org/files/images/businessman.preview.jpg[/img]
Gender:Male
Group(Duelist, Rouge Psychic, Neo Psychic, Pheonix Psychic):Pheonix Psychic
Rank(only for Pheonix or Neo Psychics):Leader
Deck(if decklist put in spoiler):Wicked Gods + Uria
Duel Spirit(optional):Uria and wicked gods
D-Wheel(optional):black with big wheels, with dreadroot, eraser, and avatar pictures on it.
Personality(optional but reccomended):Calm, Collected, and genourus.
Bio(can be short):Too lazy, will update.
Other:none[/spoiler]
The chapters will be longer than the prologue.
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...uuuuuuuuuuuuum.
Please write a real first chapter before posting. I'm here to read fanfiction, not a poorly written paragraph. If you don't even have enough characters to make the story, I don't see you having business writing the story in the first place.

Also, you know those things called books? Try and emulate those. They usually have these things called paragraphs and spacing. You'll notice a new line starts every time someone new is talking or thinking -- that's not a coincidence. You'll also notice there are still long paragraphs -- again, not an accident. One more thing books have that you might want to aim for is chapters that take up more than three lines.
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