nemewolf Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 EDITEDthis is my first Ritual Monster so can you please correct me if i have gone wrong in any ways :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 It's alright, but there are some mistakes on the Monster's effect; you have to mention that it cannot be summoned except via "Transformation", and the effect itself coulld use rewriting, but it's perfectly understandable as it is. ;) 7/10 for your first try. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 The spell card could be more colourful, its rather bland. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 They ar ok=/6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemewolf Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 can you tell me how i should write the effect then please? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 lol, ask DJ osiris, he is the god of grammar here XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 I believe all you need is to check the sticky 'how to write a proper effect' and it should give you tips on how to word rituals correctly ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemewolf Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 Changed ritual spell card pic, and changed the effect of "WereGuardian" :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 8.5/10 Much better! With time you'll learn to make your cards more original, but I like that attitude of fixing your mistakes and wanting to improve, and like I said before, it's great for a first try. Props! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 They are ok i just dislike the pictures, you got your OCG right as far as i can see, whitch was only a quick glance, still good effort so 7/10 *_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 i love werewolfs so...good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Dark Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 It's alright. I rate this Card 7.5 /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 I think the pictures could be a bit more unique, but otherwise, excellent! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemewolf Posted January 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 the only thing about getting original pictures is that it is so hard to get a decent picture of a werewolf, if anyone could find a good one for me i will be very happy :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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