Makor Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/4666/340722i.jpg[/img] Lore: FLIP: Put all the monsters on your side of the field (including this monster) in face-down Defense Position, then rearrange them. Your monsters may not attack or change their Battle Positions this turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aydane Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 theres no such thing as a shadow demon type monster this is a fiend type, the effect is good but say somwthing like you can only use this cards effect twice this duel, and can you think of a better name than just "shadow" i dont care if you change the name or not but shadow come on thats abit lazy, over all 7/10. 8.5 if you change the card type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Lore: FLIP: Put all the monsters on your side of the field (including this monster) in face-down Defense Position, then rearrange them. Your monsters may not attack or change their Battle Positions this turn. FLIP: Flip all monsters on your side of the field into face-down Defense Position, then rearrange them. Your monsters cannot attack or change their battle positions until the end of your turn. Fix'd Also, fake types are frowned upon among most YCMers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 [quote name='aydane' timestamp='1294193648' post='4912476'] theres no such thing as a shadow demon type monster this is a fiend type, the effect is good but say somwthing like you can only use this cards effect twice this duel, and can you think of a better name than just "shadow" i dont care if you change the name or not but shadow come on thats abut lazy over all 8/10 [/quote] I made up its type. It might go in a set later. As for its name... for some reason I wanted to call it Shadow, simply Shadow. I could have called it Phantom Shifter from the 8th Dimension, but I'm gonna stick with Shadow. [quote name='tdloe' timestamp='1294193691' post='4912479'] their battle positions until the end of [b]your[/b] turn. [/quote] If the card is activated on the opponent's turn the player of this card can attack and switch his or her card positions when its his or her turn, your wording doesn't really account for that. I'm sticking with the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<}Alpha Frogodile{> Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 [quote name='Makor' timestamp='1294194173' post='4912489'] I made up its type. It might go in a set later. As for its name... for some reason I wanted to call it Shadow, simply Shadow. I could have called it Phantom Shifter from the 8th Dimension, but I'm gonna stick with Shadow. If the card is activated on the opponent's turn the player of this card can attack and switch his or her card positions, your wording doesn't really account for that. I'm sticking with the original. [/quote] [quote name='tdloe' timestamp='1294193691' post='4912479'] Lore: FLIP: Put all the monsters on your side of the field (including this monster) in face-down Defense Position, then rearrange them. Your monsters may not attack or change their Battle Positions this turn. FLIP: Flip all monsters on your side of the field into face-down Defense Position, then rearrange them. Your monsters cannot attack or change their battle positions [b]this turn.[/b] [b]Also, fake types are frowned upon among most YCMers.[/b] [/quote] fix'd again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 [quote name='tdloe' timestamp='1294194418' post='4912514'] fix'd again. [/quote] Thanks for the tips, all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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