Kazekage dragon Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 These are a couple of cards for a dragon set I'm developing. Since some of the cards in this set have some effects that may be considered broken, I am posting the set here in AoC. Also after the set I made a synchro that has dragon in it's name but is a machine. (similar to Cyber Dragon) [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/1018/39761.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon type monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. That monster's effect(s) is negated. [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/1018/39761.jpg[/img] Lore: "Baby G. Dragon" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn you can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it. [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/759/39761r.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned by removing from play "Golden Dragon" from the Graveyard. Spells and Traps cannot be activated while this card remains on the Field. [img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1018/39761.jpg[/img] Lore: When a Dragon type monster you control is designated as an attack target negate the attack. All monsters on your opponents side of the field are destroyed. Apart from the Set: [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/4719/39761m.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters Each time this card destroys your opponent's monster, remove that monster from play. Your opponent takes damage equal to the destroyed monsters ATK. That is all for now. Please give me some constructive criticism, maybe a rating to help me get better and improve these cards. (Also if you know about my past rookie mistake, please don't judge me because of that. I was young, stupid and I didn't know how to use forums) How you can rate me: A simple scale from 1-10 Thank You -Kaz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 Dragon's Mirror Force is a little too powerful. I recommend taking out the "This card's activation cannot be negated" bit. Then it becomes so much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YGOTASrules Posted January 5, 2011 Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 hey cool cards, nice effects, not one is op'd except for the "Dragon mirror" because well : DESTROY ALL MONSTERS ON YOUR OPPONENTS SIDE OF THE FIELD, that is a bit too strong as well as it cannot be negated so yeah but it is really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazekage dragon Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Thanks to both of you! I admit that my D. Mirror Force was a little overpowered so I took out the part of "Activation cannot be negated." Also, the image of Celestial Golden Dragon is up (finally!) Anyone else care to review, rate or comment? PS. All previous posters have dragon avatars, cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDarkKingBringerOfDark Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 nice cards 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazekage dragon Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 [quote name='The darkknight2' timestamp='1294290539' post='4915026'] nice cards 10/10 [/quote] Thanks! Also I'm going to post some of my additions here: (Just to not exceed the 5 card per post limit) [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4886/39761t.jpg[/img] Lore: This protector of the "Temple of the Dragons" does not have the special abilities of dragons. However, he does posses the ability to launch strong attacks! [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/1018/39761.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only when your opponent's monster declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster and end the Battle Phase. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3485/39761h.jpg[/img] Lore: While this card is face up "Temple of the Dragons" cannot be destroyed. Once per turn, negate the activation of a card that destroys 1 or more cards on the field and destroy it. (In the actual card there is an OCG error one-1 sorry) [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/4886/39761t.jpg[/img] Lore: All face-up Dragon type monsters gain 500 ATK. If a Dragon type monster you control is destroyed Special summon it during your next Standby Phase. That monster's effect(s) is negated. For some reason I don't believe these cards should really go in AoC as they are somewhat realistic. What do you guys think? Also, if some of you could revise the OCG as I believe there may be minor details I could have overlooked. Thank You -Kaz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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