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Varhmiel, Lightsworn Archer new lightsworn card


aydane

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LORE: This card can attack your opponent driecly, if you do, this monsters ATK becomes 800 during the Damage Step only. Each time a Lightsworn monster gets sent from the deck to the graveyard special summon 1 "Light Archer" Token to your side of the field (Light, Fairy, LVL 3, ATK 1300, DEF 1000). During each of your End Phases Send the top 2 cards from your deck to the graveyard.
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First i would like to fix the OCG:

This card can attack your opponent directly, if you do, this monster's ATK becomes 800 during the Damage Step only. Each time a "Lightsworn" monster sent from the Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Light Archer" Token to your side of the field (LIGHT/ Fairy/ Level 3/ ATK 1300/ DEF 1000). During each of your End Phases, send the top 2 cards from your Deck to the Graveyard.

I say this is interesting, and well done. Summoning a Token but likely useless because another Lightsworns need a lot of Monster Card Zone. But your card isn't bad, i give 8/10 for it. Nice
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This line should read: Whenever a "Lightsworn" monster gets sent from the Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Light Archer Token" (LIGHT/ Fairy/ Level 3/ ATK 1300/ DEF 1000) to your side of the field.

The Token's Stats always go after its name and also the whole name needs to be in quotation marks.
I think it's rather balanced but the last effect is a little iffy to me.
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