Nazryl Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 [center]I haven't made any cards in a while and so, to begin I'm giving a new look to an older set I made. The OCG isn't perfect so if you comment on it, please provide corrections. [Spoiler=Coming soon!] Future Mekanik Beasts of Myth Ghosts [/spoiler] The more comments I get, the more cards I will post. [i]With the Mekanikal city caught between the war of the Virtuous and the Unclean, Doctor Atrius Demine felt it was his duty to protect his home. With a vast knowledge of the working of machines, he captured various beasts of the world and combined them with advanced machinery to serve as his loyal protectors, but the energy core that powered each beast was unstable and would raise or lower the combat effectiveness of the creatures. Atrius now works tirelessly to stabilize his creations and protect himself from the war that rages around his home. [/i] [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Mekanik Monsters] [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/4881/315901w.jpg[/img] Once per turn, during your main phase, you can decrease the ATK of all "Mekanik" monsters you control by 500 until the battle phase. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can destroy a "Mekanik" monster you control instead (Damage calculation is applied normally). [img]http://img815.imageshack.us/img815/337/315901.jpg[/img] Once per turn you can return 1 face up 'Mekanik' monster with 900 ATK or less, you control to your hand. If you use this effect, you can Normal Summon a 'Mekanik' monster in addition to your Normal Summon this turn. [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3697/315901t.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x300. If this card has 900 ATK or less, it can attack twice during the battle phase. [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/337/315901.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x300. If this card has 900 ATK or less, once per turn, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/1927/315901v.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll 2, 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x200. If this card has 800 ATK or less, you can tribute this card to destroy two cards on the field. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4572/315901k.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x300. If this card has 900 ATK or less, it can attack your opponent directly. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/107/315901a.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x100. If this card has 300 ATK or less and is sent to the graveyard except as a result of battle, Special Summon it during your next Standby phase. [i]The art for this card is poor as the only other images I could find were real Steampunk birds. If anyone has a better image and would like to send it my way, feel free to do so[/i] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/1365/315901i.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x300. Whenever a "Mekanik" monster is summoned, roll a 6 sided dice and increase this cards ATK equal to the dice roll x100. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/2669/315901b.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll 2, 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x200. If this card has 800 ATK or less and is destroyed by battle, destroy any monster that attacked this card during the end phase. [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/337/315901.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x200. If this card has 1000 ATK or less, once per turn you can select 1 EARTH type, machine monster with 1000 DEF in your graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/6892/315901e.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned, roll a 6 sided dice. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x500. If this card has 2000 ATK or less, once per turn during your main phase, you can roll a 6 sided dice and reduce the ATK of your opponents monsters equal to the dice roll x200 until your next standby phase. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1696/315901h.jpg[/img] You can only Tribute Summon this card by using "Mekanik" monsters. Whenever a "Mekanik" monster you control is destroyed, roll a six sided dice. Lower this cards ATK equal to the dice roll x100. If this card has 800 ATK or less, destroy every card on the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Future Mekaniks] [img]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/337/315901.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card by tributing 1 "Mekanik Ash-Sass-Sin" with 800 ATK or more. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 card on the field. If you use this effect, this card can not attack your opponent directly this turn. [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/337/315901.jpg[/img] This can can not be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card by tributing 1 "Mekanik Skorps-Eon" with 900 ATK or more. When this card is Summoned, roll 2, 6 sided dice, this cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x300. If this card has 1800 ATK or less, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/107/315901a.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card by tributing 1 "Mekanik Lie-Eon" with 2000 ATK or more. If you control a "Mekanik" or "Future" monster, reduce the ATK of your opponents monsters by 500. [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7738/315901l.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card by tributing 1 "Mekanik How-End" with 1200 ATK or more. Whenever you Special Summon a Machine type monster, increase this cards ATK by 300. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/5554/315901x.jpg[/img] This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card by tributing 1 "Mekanik Roe-Been" with 200 ATK or more. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a "Future" Synchro monster, return this card to your hand instead of sending it to the graveyard. [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/1627/315901c.jpg[/img] "Future Roe-Been + 1 or more Non-Tuner "Mekanik" monsters. When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can discard 3 cards in your hand to destroy every card on the field except this card. Once per turn, by paying 1000 lifepoints, return 4 "Mekanik" monsters from your graveyard to your deck and draw 2 cards. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Synchro Monsters] *NEW* [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/7198/315901z.jpg[/img] 1 Mekanik Tuner + 1 or more, non-tuner monsters. When this card is Summoned, roll a dice for each "Mekanik" monster on the field. This cards ATK is equal to the dice roll x300. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can remove from play 1 "Mekanik" monster from your side of the field and Special Summon this card. *NEW* [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/5554/315901x.jpg[/img] When this card is Summoned you can reveal any number of "Mekanik" monsters in your hand and roll a 6 sided dice for each monster revealed. This cards ATK is equal to the dice rolls x400. Whenever a "Mekanik" monster is sent from the field to the graveyard, you can equip it to this card, this card gains 400 ATK for each "Mekanik" monster equipped to it. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/337/315901.jpg[/img] Whenever a 6 sided dice is rolled for the effect of a "Mekanik" monster, treat the result as 4. [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/94/315901d.jpg[/img] You can only activate this card when a "Mekanik" monster is selected as a attack target by 1 of your opponents monsters. Destroy the attacking monster and 1 "Mekanik" monster you control. [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3564/315901r.jpg[/img] Whenever a 6 sided dice is rolled, draw a card for each result that is either 3, 4 or 5. [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/7738/315901l.jpg[/img] Select 1 "Mekanik" monster you control with 800 ATK or less and 1 "Mekanik" monster in your graveyard. Switch the effects of the selected monsters. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/1696/315901h.jpg[/img] Activate only when your opponent declares a attack against a "Mekanik" monster you control. Destroy the attacking monster and end the battle phase. *NEW* [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/337/315901.jpg[/img] Select 1 level 4 or lower monster in your opponents graveyard and Special Summon it. Roll a 6 sided dice and decrease the ATK of the Special Summoned monsters equal to the result x100. The monsters current effect is negated and it gains the following effect: If this cards ATK is 800 or lower, once per turn you can look at your opponents hand and send 1 card from it to the graveyard. [i]Wasn't sure on the OCG of this card, fixes please?[/i] *NEW* [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/3075/315901f.jpg[/img] You can only activate this card when your opponent declares a direct attack. Roll a 6 sided dice. If the result is 1, 2 or 3, select 1 "Mekanik" monster in your graveyard and Special Summon it face down. If the result is 4, 5 or 6, you can remove from play 1 "Mekanik" monster to half the attacking monsters ATK until the end phase. [/spoiler] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katana ◄► Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Please, keep on! It's really interesting that you've made a backstory for you cards, by the way !! The pictures are great, and effects are very creative. I don't see any mistakes on your grammar, so I will give you a [b]9.4/10[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 I have a card suggestion, but maybe you thought of this already: [b][i]Atrius Stabilizer Continuous Spell Card When a six-sided die is rolled for the effect of a Mekanik monster, treat the result as 4.[/i][/b] The cards are both very cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Katana- Thank you for the comment. Yeah, the backstory is something I do with all the sets I make, just adds a little more flavour to the set and the story with each ties in with each other, so all my cards exist in that one world Smeagol- Thank you for the suggestion. I hadn't thought of any Spell or Trap cards yet but that is a really goo idea! Thank you! +Rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Laptop decided it wants to work again so two more cards added! Comment, rate, hate or love? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Four more cards added, including the beginning of the Sets Spell cards! More comments, means more cards people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 New cards! Not too sure about the Trap as I've already got Core Overload in there. Comments, rates, hates and fixes? Post 'em people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Daigusto Sphreez Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 I must say, I really like this idea! The dice mekanik (see what I did there? ) is an interesting and creative feature. I enjoy the element of luck involved in these cards, at times they will be mediocre and at times they'll be fantastic.. Overall, the chance of getting a miserable result is balanced out with the effect of some of the cards, the effects themselves aren't that creative, the way there present is. Cards like the atrius factory of production would have to be limited though, I think. I haven't looked closely, but the OCG looks decent. It would be nice to see what higher level monsters would turn out like in this archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Thanks for the comment. I see what you did there, very clever I agree that the ATK based effects arn't that creative, but I have so many more ideas ready that are on their way and I'm in agreement on your comment about the Atrius Factory. I was originally going to put a stipulation on the cards, such as only one can be face up on your side of the field at any one time? But as the set is in construction period, there is always time for editing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Added new cards including the Sets boss monster, first Synchro and traps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Nazryl Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 The Mekanik monsters have gone to the future! Rate and comment on the new additions to this ever growing set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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