War Chess Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Oh, hi again. Its been a while since I don't make a topic, and recently, my BFF Sondance gave me enough points to get rank 7 ( ). So, in her name, I made brand new Sondance Cards ! ! ! And as I was so inspired, I took the risk of making Excess Monsters. Of course, to the Community. So here are the Sondance Cards ! [spoiler=Sondance, Kabuki Queen] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4121/56865c.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card battles a Defense Position monster, destroy it without applying damage calculation. When a player discards a card(s), inflict 300 damage to that player.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sondance, The Fog Princess] [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/882/56865l.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During each players' Standby Phases, the turn player gains 300 Life Points. If this card is targeted by a Trap Card, destroy it.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Lovely Bride, Sondance] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/2992/56865t.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 LIGHT monsters. Both players gain 700 Life Points during your End Phase. This card cannot attack directly. Neither player can discard cards from their hands.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Cosmic Spirit Sondance] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: You can Tribute this card to Overlay 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard on 1 Excess Monster you control. You can discard 2 cards from your hand to add this card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sondance, the Surreal Fighter] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Exceed Summoned, draw 1 card. If it was a Trap Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, your opponent discards 1 random card from his hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Excessive Knight Sondance] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5543/56865o.jpg[/img] Lore: This card gains 500 ATK for each monster on the field. If a monster you control (including this card) would be destroyed by battle, you can Tribute it and gain 400 Life Points instead.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sondance, The Apprentice] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3404/56865d.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can attack your opponent directly while there are monsters Overlaid on it. You can discard a Level 4 or lower monster from your hand to have this card gain half of its ATK until the End Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sondance] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: A lovely lady that lives beside her love, Prince Techi. She wonders if someday she will have an adventure. Her life is given to help others, leaving no time for herself. But in her dreams, she is a queen.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Phoenixian Sondance] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: The ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the ATK and DEF of the monsters Overlaid on it. You can pay half your Life Points to Overlay 1 monster you control on this card. During the End Phase, remove it from play.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sniping Sondance] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9567/56865a.jpg[/img] Discard 1 card from your hand. Your opponent discards 1 random card from his hand. This card loses 200 ATK for each card in your opponent's hand. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to have this card gain 100 ATK and DEF.[/spoiler] So please, comment on the cards. Talk about OCG, balance, playability, picture and if you liked the idea. Thanks Sondance ! ! ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Oh wow....never thought I could be so many cards... I love the pics for Phoenixian Sondance and Sondance, The Fog Princess.. I like them all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Thanks Sondance. I suppose you can't give me a detailed rating, but can you give me a general one ? Also, I'm so glad you liked it . I will make more. But for now these 10 are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katana â—„â–º Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 " When this card battles a Defense Position monster, destroy it without applying damage calculation " - I don't think you need to say that "Destroy without applying damage calculation" ... You won't do any damage if you battle a Defense Position monster anyway. The third card is kinda underpowered > all its effects either do good stuff for you AND your opponent, besides the fact that it can't attack directly and you must Tribute 2 LIGHT monsters to summon it !! Also, I don't know what are Excess Monsters Sorry D: BTW< check my card too ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Thanks Katana. I meant with "no damage calculation" to destroy with the effect, without battle. Like Drillroid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katana â—„â–º Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 Oh, now I get it ! Then it's okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 OK. Can you comment about the pictures and the balance of the other cards OR they are ok ? Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katana â—„â–º Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 The second one is okay, seems average ... Like I said, I don't know what are Excess Monsters, so I didn't understand quite well most of your cards Vanilla Sondance seems fine, description is good, and you posted Excessive Knight Sondance twice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 [quote name='Katana â—„â–º' timestamp='1294340994' post='4915769'] and you posted Excessive Knight Sondance twice [/quote] Thanks a lot for telling me this. I edited it. Now Sondance, The Apprentice is there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Oh people, I can't believe you don't wanna see Sondance's cards. Many of you must know her, so comment and rate the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [color=blue][b]Sondance Archetype Review[/b][/color] The card's are quite odd. They seem to have some Life Point / Hand / Battle strategy to them, along with a touch of being related to Trap Card's for some of them as well. There are a few errors here and there in the OCG, but my main problem is synergy. With all of them having different Attributes and Types in most cases, this makes them slightly hard to use specifically for certain cards such as trying to run Allure of Darkness in a Deck for this may be hard, seeing you only have 3 DARK's and the rest vary on Attribute. Same thing goes with type. Balance is also a problem with the Archetype, seeing here and there you have some overpowering cards, even though if they are Excess Monsters, and some underpowered cards as well. With only having monsters in the Set, this makes you rely on TCG Spells and Traps to help out the Archetype, but even then, the Archetype will most likely get out-swarmed and whatnot through other Decks such as X-Sabers. Sure they seem fun, and have potential, but overall, a [b]4/10[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1294510819' post='4920455'] [color=blue][b]Sondance Archetype Review[/b][/color] The card's are quite odd. They seem to have some Life Point / Hand / Battle strategy to them, along with a touch of being related to Trap Card's for some of them as well. There are a few errors here and there in the OCG, but my main problem is synergy. With all of them having different Attributes and Types in most cases, this makes them slightly hard to use specifically for certain cards such as trying to run Allure of Darkness in a Deck for this may be hard, seeing you only have 3 DARK's and the rest vary on Attribute. Same thing goes with type. Balance is also a problem with the Archetype, seeing here and there you have some overpowering cards, even though if they are Excess Monsters, and some underpowered cards as well. With only having monsters in the Set, this makes you rely on TCG Spells and Traps to help out the Archetype, but even then, the Archetype will most likely get out-swarmed and whatnot through other Decks such as X-Sabers. Sure they seem fun, and have potential, but overall, a [b]4/10[/b] [/quote] Wasn't expecting that, but thanks. I only ask you and anyone to correct my OCG so I can improve. My objective, though, was to make random cards related to Sondance and Excess, not really an engine or so. Thanks a lot for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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