War Chess Posted January 6, 2011 Report Share Posted January 6, 2011 The title is not the best, as its not related to Umi, but its the best I thought about. [size="5"]Umi Crystal[/size] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1742/56865p.jpg[/img] Lore: Your opponent cannot select WATER monsters as an effect target. If a WATER monster would be destroyed by battle, its controller can pay 1000 Life Points instead. Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after this card's activation. Help me improve, comment on OCG, balance and playability. If you really liked this topic, give me an internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon7OP Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='War Chess' timestamp='1294355023' post='4916304'] The title is not the best, as its not related to Umi, but its the best I thought about. [size="5"]Umi Crystal[/size] [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/1742/56865p.jpg[/img] Lore: Your opponent cannot select WATER monsters as an effect target. If a WATER monster would be destroyed by battle, its controller can pay 1000 Life Points instead. Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after this card's activation. Help me improve, comment on OCG, balance and playability. If you really liked this topic, give me an internet. [/quote] I think the OCG would go "Your opponent cannot select a face-up WATER monster(s) as an effect target. If a WATER monster would be destroyed by battle, its controller can pay 1000 Life Points to negate its destruction. (Battle damage is applied normally). Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after activation." Its first effect Is good. The second effect is worded funny in the original, as you would take the damage + 1000. Maybe tweak that a little? The third effect is odd. I'm not sure of this would be a time-limit card, as there are plenty of traps with stronger effects that are plain continuous. All in all, i'd say EE (7/10). Maybe higher if reworded a little. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Dragon7OP' timestamp='1294368339' post='4916839'] I think the OCG would go "Your opponent cannot select a face-up WATER monster(s) as an effect target. If a WATER monster would be destroyed by battle, its controller can pay 1000 Life Points to negate its destruction. (Battle damage is applied normally). Destroy this card during your 3rd Standby Phase after activation." Its first effect Is good. The second effect is worded funny in the original, as you would take the damage + 1000. Maybe tweak that a little? The third effect is odd. I'm not sure of this would be a time-limit card, as there are plenty of traps with stronger effects that are plain continuous. All in all, i'd say EE (7/10). Maybe higher if reworded a little. [/quote] Thanks, but I don't think "to negate its destruction" is necessary. I appreciate your opinion, I just put a time limit to play safe, but as I see it Underpowers the card, I'll edit it later. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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