Chaos Number: Card Master Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Chapter 23 is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneycombTroy Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 In chapter 23, you wrote, "And this for the lucky one that escaped but will never see [size="7"][/size][font="Impact"][/font]his[font="Arial"][/font][size="3"][/size] parents again" How did Red know it was a boy? You just need to fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Number: Card Master Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 accident *FacePalm* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Number: Card Master Posted February 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 accident *FacePalm* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Number: Card Master Posted February 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2011 BUMP Ok i will write a chapter either 2moro or the next day Meanwhile could people read it and tell me what mistake's i have made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Number: Card Master Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Could someone please read it and comment on it BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Number: Card Master Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 I am back and Chapter 24 is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneycombTroy Posted April 13, 2011 Report Share Posted April 13, 2011 awesome chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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