chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Found my old burn deck and couldn't help myself Never made a Burn monster before, I hope it's o.k: [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2538/217615.jpg[/img] While you control this face-up card, any Battle Damage you inflict is treated as Effect Damage instead. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can discard 1 card to add 1 "Dark Room of Nightmare" from your Deck to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windfang Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Not bad not bad, the battle damage to direct damage is confusing and this line When this card destroys a Defence Position monster inflict Battle Damage equal to the difference between this card's ATK and the DEF of the attacked monster should be like this When this card battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower then this card's ATK, inflict Piercing Damage. Other then that. not bad 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Windfang' timestamp='1294370660' post='4916920'] Not bad not bad, the battle damage to direct damage is confusing and this line When this card destroys a Defence Position monster inflict Battle Damage equal to the difference between this card's ATK and the DEF of the attacked monster should be like this When this card battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower then this card's ATK, inflict Piercing Damage. Other then that. not bad 7.5/10 [/quote] I've been out of this for a while now but I've heard rumours about "Piercing Damage" is that O.K to be used in OCG now?? Also what do you find confusing about the battle damage to direct? It's simple really, battle damage becomes direct damage instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windfang Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 by Direct Damage, do you mean- Effect Damage for Direct Attack Damage(also called Battle Damage)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Windfang' timestamp='1294371308' post='4916939'] by Direct Damage, do you mean- Effect Damage for Direct Attack Damage(also called Battle Damage)? [/quote] Direct Damage like ookazi, I'm not sure effect damage is a term that actually exists Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windfang Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Yeah. Had to read up on how Effect Damage is called on some cards and Direct Damage is one of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 OCG fix time! While you control this face-up card, any Battle Damage you inflict is treated as Effect Damage instead. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card destroys a monster by Battle, you can discard 1 card to add 1 "Dark Room of Nightmare" from your Deck to your hand. Great card. Balanced, searches for a important card of the strategy and converts any battle damage to effect damage. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1294410038' post='4917514'] OCG fix time! While you control this face-up card, any Battle Damage you inflict is treated as Effect Damage instead. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card destroys a monster by Battle, you can discard 1 card to add 1 "Dark Room of Nightmare" from your Deck to your hand. Great card. Balanced, searches for a important card of the strategy and converts any battle damage to effect damage. 8/10 [/quote] Thanks for the OCG fix but if you read the card, dark room of nightmare goes to the top of the deck not the hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Sorry about that mistake. But for my suggestion, make it to add it to the hand. I wouldn't want to skip a draw for Dark Room of Nightmare hehehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1294416952' post='4917634'] Sorry about that mistake. But for my suggestion, make it to add it to the hand. I wouldn't want to skip a draw for Dark Room of Nightmare hehehe [/quote] I just think that with the 2 effects before that may make it a little OP'd but everyone is different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1294432727' post='4918005'] I just think that with the 2 effects before that may make it a little OP'd but everyone is different. [/quote] I think it wouldn't, cuz monster removal is very easy nowadays, and this card's not particurally strong ATK-wise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Adding it to the top of your deck = bad. Change it to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Champion Lance' timestamp='1294433298' post='4918040'] Adding it to the top of your deck = bad. Change it to your hand. [/quote] Do you not think (considering its first 2 effects) that it would become too OP'd if you could add it to your hand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 errors: 1 OCG error great pic, balanced and for the most part good OCG LORE: While you control this face-up card, any Battle Damage you inflict is treated as Effect Damage instead. [b]This card inflicts Piercing Damage[/b] [i]what?[/i]. When this card destroys a monster by [b]b[/b]attle, you can discard 1 card to find 1 "Dark Room of Nightmare" from your Deck and add it to the top of your Deck. Rating: 9.7/10 check my sig to see what that rating means (round it to a 10/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1294433634' post='4918056'] Do you not think (considering its first 2 effects) that it would become too OP'd if you could add it to your hand? [/quote] Effect 1 : No. Effect 2 : No. Even if you changed it to your hand it would STILL be slightly UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Genex Firefox' timestamp='1294433940' post='4918068'] errors: 1 OCG error great pic, balanced and for the most part good OCG LORE: While you control this face-up card, any Battle Damage you inflict is treated as Effect Damage instead. [b]This card inflicts Piercing Damage[/b] [i]what?[/i]. When this card destroys a monster by [b]b[/b]attle, you can discard 1 card to find 1 "Dark Room of Nightmare" from your Deck and add it to the top of your Deck. Rating: 9.7/10 check my sig to see what that rating means (round it to a 10/10) [/quote] Piercing damage is now an official term used in YGO which in essence is the mad sword beast effect. It must be very new as I have never seen it before but I am assured that you can use it in OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 "This card inflicts piercing damage." is already on a tcg monster so its allowed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Champion Lance' timestamp='1294434438' post='4918086'] Effect 1 : No. Effect 2 : No. Even if you changed it to your hand it would STILL be slightly UP. [/quote] I have changed it now. I did actually toy with that idea before but I felt that it may have been OP'd. I have checked the card again and I agree with you now so I have changed it and gone with my original idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 oh ok your rating stays at 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Genex Firefox' timestamp='1294435479' post='4918125'] oh ok your rating stays at 9.5/10 [/quote] You gave me 9.7 before lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 O.o okay then it stays a 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='Genex Firefox' timestamp='1294435866' post='4918147'] O.o okay then it stays a 9.7/10 [/quote] cheerz lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 Nice, now it's cool! I'll up my rating to a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1294441476' post='4918460'] Nice, now it's cool! I'll up my rating to a 9/10 [/quote] thanksDon't forget to check out my other burn card. "Anti-Matter Longshore Cannon" it should be in the RC section still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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