ShootingTheMoon Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [center][i]The 'Departed' archetype is sort of like the 'Worm' archetype. There are 26 monsters, one for each of the alphabet. Their ATK and DEF go up for each Monster in your Graveyard or Hand. OCG Corrections and Ratings Appreciated.[/i] [spoiler=Synchros] [spoiler=The Departed - Collision Dragon] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7500/63457.jpg[/img] LORE:2 Tuners + One Dragon-Type Non Tuner Monster Each time this card destroys a Synchro monster that's Level 6 or under, it's DEF points add onto this card's DEF. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Effect Monsters] [spoiler=The Departed - Anubis] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7500/63457.jpg[/img] LORE:While this card is Face-Up on the field, this card is treated as a Warrior-type monster. For each Fiend-type Monster in your Graveyard, increase the ATK of this card by 500. If there are any other Monsters on your field, destroy them and inflict damage equal to the monster's level x500. [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Departed - Behemoth] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/957/63457r.jpg[/img] LORE:This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when "Gazelle King of Mythical Beasts" and "Berfomet" are in your Graveyard. While there are 2 more beast-type monsters on your field, this card cannot be selected as a Attack Target. For each beast-type monster in your Graveyard, this card gains 300 ATK. [/spoiler] [/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 Correct OCG for first one: Two tuners + one dragon-type non-tuner monster If this card destroy a level 6 or lower Synchro monster by battle, this card gains ATK equal to the destroyed monsters DEF. Not worth the cost to summon. Effect isn't very useful, and there are better things to use...also, why ? DEF? 3/10 The second one is an exact copy of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sakuretsu_Armor"]this[/url], except with incorrect OCG. And this is outclassed. .../10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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War Chess Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 My OCG FIXES : 2 Tuners + 1 non-Tuner Dragon-Type monster Each time this card destroys a a Level 6 or lower Synchro monster by battle, this card gains DEF equal to that monster's DEF. Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster. COMMENTS : The 1st card seems UP in my opinion, because it has a limitation of monsters it destroys to gain DEF. Also, you might change its DEF to 0, not ?. And Synchro Summon him seems pretty hard (2 tuners and exactly 1 non-tuner). The second card is a "copy" of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sakuretsu_Armor"]this[/url]. (Even though it has different name, image and you wrote the effect differently, they're the same.) But I liked both cards pictures. So by lack of creativity and lack of balance, my rate is 4.5/10 Try harder next time and pay attention to OCG and originality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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