fanyetnot Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [spoiler='Monsters'][spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu'][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: During your Draw Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard, you can add this card to your hand instead of drawing. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "Phoenix Tamer" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Tamer Faia'][img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of this card. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Tamer Kaen'][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Eternal Phoenix" monsters in your Graveyard x 300.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Tamer Kasai'][img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 200.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Tamer Enkou'][img]http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Until your next Standby Phase, your opponent cannot select another "Eternal Phoenix" monster as an attack target or attack you directly.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Tamer Yokobue'][img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Until the Standby Phase, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points each time they draw a card(s).[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Yakedo'][img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/366/325629t.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Eternal Phoenix" Tuner Monster + 1 or more non tuner FIRE monsters While this card is face-up on the field, you can activate the effect of any "Eternal Phoenix" without having to reveal an "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand. During your End Phase, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Taiyou'][img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Eternal Phoenix" Tuner Monster + 1 or more non tuner FIRE monsters Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Remove from play 1 "Eternal Phoenix" monster from your Gravyard and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the removed monster.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Eternal Phoenix Funshutsu'][img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Eternal Phoenix" Tuner Monster + 1 or more FIRE monsters If you reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand, when this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster, whichever is higher.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells/Traps *NEW!*'][spoiler='Resurrection of the Eternal Phoenix'][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: You can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. If you control a face-up "Eternal Phoenix Tamer" monster, you can Special Summon 1 "Eternal Phoenix" monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.[/spoiler] [spoiler='The Eternal Phoenix Reborn'][img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate when an "Eternal Phoenix" monster on your side of the field is destroyed. Select 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. Then Special Summon 1 "Eternal Phoenix" monster from your Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Arrival of the Eternal Phoenix'][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: Discard 1 "Eternal Phoenix" monster from your hand to the Graveyard. Add 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Born from the Eternal Flame'][img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/959/325629.jpg[/img] Lore: You can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. You can activate this card during the turn in which an "Eternal Phoenix" monster on your side of the field is destroyed by your opponent's card (either by battle or by card effect). Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Eternal Phoenix Tamer" monster from your hand or Deck.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 A little OPed, but good. 8/10 BTW, you should use spoilers for that many cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 Since it is my namesake, I, of course, love the theme! Few errors, though: Faia: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of this card. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn. Kaen: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Eternal Phoenix" monsters in your Graveyard x 300. Kasai: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 200. She looks like she's been rendered with the phoenix and stuck on a BG, though. Enkou: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Until your next Standby Phase, your opponent cannot select an "Eternal Phoenix" monster as an attack target or attack you directly. Her effect's a little OP for her Level. Make her Level 5. Yokobue: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Until the Standby Phase, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points each time they draw a card(s). Yakedo: 1 "Eternal Phoenix" Tuner Monster + 1 or more non tuner FIRE monsters While this card is face-up on the field, you can activate the effect of any "Eternal Phoenix" without having to reveal an "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand. During your End Phase, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Taiyou: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Remove from play 1 "Eternal Phoenix" monster from your Gravyard and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the removed monster. Funshutsu: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the [b]ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster, whichever is higher[/b]. Little unsure on the OCG for the bolded bit. Overall, you should probably keep "Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect." on your clipboard, since most of the cards use that line of thought. Pretty good. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted January 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1294474295' post='4919584'] Since it is my namesake, I, of course, love the theme! Few errors, though: Faia: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the original ATK of this card. If you activate this effect, this card cannot attack this turn. Kaen: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Eternal Phoenix" monsters in your Graveyard x 300. Kasai: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 200. She looks like she's been rendered with the phoenix and stuck on a BG, though. Enkou: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Until your next Standby Phase, your opponent cannot select an "Eternal Phoenix" monster as an attack target or attack you directly. Her effect's a little OP for her Level. Make her Level 5. Yokobue: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Until the Standby Phase, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points each time they draw a card(s). Yakedo: 1 "Eternal Phoenix" Tuner Monster + 1 or more non tuner FIRE monsters While this card is face-up on the field, you can activate the effect of any "Eternal Phoenix" without having to reveal an "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand. During your End Phase, inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Taiyou: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. Remove from play 1 "Eternal Phoenix" monster from your Gravyard and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the removed monster. Funshutsu: Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the [b]ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster, whichever is higher[/b]. Little unsure on the OCG for the bolded bit. Overall, you should probably keep "Once per turn, you can reveal 1 "Eternal Phoenix Fenikkusu" in your hand to activate this card's effect." on your clipboard, since most of the cards use that line of thought. Pretty good. 8/10. [/quote] Thanks bro. I'll get to updating the effects ASAP. I'm just in the middle of another new set. Nothing too extreme though. I'm still getting used to the site and coming up with cool archtypes and combo effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 I fixed the card lores of all the cards. Thanks to Phoenix19 for assisting with the OCG problems I had. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dahpretzel1 Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Nice cards and cool set. 7/10. Just a tad bit OP'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 From the quick glance I saw I loved it. Simple to use, but also usable. Funfact: Ignis avis is latin for fire bird, or a easy way to say pheonix. Gotta say I am biased Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 23, 2011 Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 Oh, do you get your images anywhere specific? Or just random places using Google images? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 23, 2011 Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 Spot on love. The effects are simple, effective, and good coercion. Now all you need is Spell and Trap support. Make it Firey! Would would be cool is if the monsters were based on revealing it in your hand, and the S/T were based on discarding it from your hand. You could make a good cycling deck like that. Be sure to add a draw engine, because you might not be able to draw if you have S/T doing that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 NEW CARDS ARE UP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 You MUST tell me where you find your images! They're awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 [quote name='Phoenix19' timestamp='1296178621' post='4966942'] You MUST tell me where you find your images! They're awesome! [/quote] I used a combination of Google Images and Photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted January 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fanyetnot Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 No coments on the new cards I add? BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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