Yu-Gi-Oh! Terminal [Chapter 1 Preview ready for review]

[Kuri]

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Usage of USD. Unofficial items may be used within. Unofficial game mechanic. Possibly PG-13, but all in do time.[/center][/font]

[spoiler=Terminal 1: Terminal Summon! PREVIEW]

"Attack Dark Magician!" A young boy yelled at a computer screen, as a magician dressed in a metallic purple-ish blue robe raised a staff from its right hand releasing dark lightning throughout a battle field. Then an image popped up displaying a card entitled 'Mirror Force' popped up from the screen. An animation of the magician's attack showed it reflect towards it and it dissolved into light particles. "Ack! I should have seen that coming..." Then a bi-pedal armored lion from the screen appeared slashing towards the screen with its sword, which then displayed the number '1500' scrambling and instead turn into the number '0'. "Crap. That means my duel record is now 0-15. Stupid terminal!" The young boy said looking angrily at a small computer attached to a wall, above it displayed 'Duel Terminal - Model 1.5x'.

Then a man dressed, in an unkempt blue uniform, walked up to the kid and proceeded to show a quarter. "Heh. Why not try again? Only 25 cents. Plus if you duel on it 100 times I'll give ya a Duel Pass worth 20 dollars."

The boy lightened his face up. "Mister, if I dueled some more I would be wasting-" The boy paused for a moment. "...a little over 20 dollars, all together. Plus my allowance is a month from now, which is only 5 dollars. Keep my record okay? And I'll see you in a month." The boy said grabbing the change he had left on the ground beside him. "Besides I keep losing. What would be the point if my stats don't get high and the machine doesn't reward me with rare, better, cards?"

"Well if you could deal some more damage it would give you something like your Dark Magician." The man, whom was an employee of the store, said waiting for another response.

"Pfft. Dark Magician was a gift from a friend who had 5 others of these. See ya mister." The boy also then grabbed the cards he had received and proceeded towards the door.

"Well then, may I get your name?"

The boy paused. "Enos Heathren. I have zero wins, fifteen loses. I suck if you hadn't have already noticed." He smiled and left. He looked back at the store and muttered, "I will win..." and continued walking. The sun was setting as Enos walked up to a house. "Home..." He took off his shoes leaving them in the front door and opened the door. When inside, he saw another boy sitting on a couch watching television. "Big brother?" Enos said running to the other boy.

The boy whose are were closed responded. "My name is Tayu, alright? No 'big brother' I want you to call me Tayu." The boy opened his eyes. "Were older, alright? So, where were you? Mom left for work she called me to come home." Tayu said getting up.

"I was at the arcade playing on the terminal. I lost though." Enos said setting the change he had placed in his pocket on a near by table.

"So you still play Yu-Gi-Oh?" The Tayu said smirking. "Though I'm 17 and you're 14 we have that one thing in common, Yu-Gi-Oh." The said walking towards a brown bag which had been set on a part of the wall. He then pulled out a deck of Yu-Gi-Oh! cards from it and began shuffling it, then set it down on the center table.

"Ah so one game? But I'll lose for sure!"[/spoiler]

[Cthonian]

I really like it and can't wait to read more.