DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [center]Onslaughter Derelin'Q [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8025/115072f.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Specal Summoned by removing from play EARTH monsters from your Graveyard so the sum of the ATK of the monsters go over 4500. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 LV 5 or higher EARTH monster you control to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. Made for a contest. And yes, "Onslaughter" is a word approved by Microsoft Word 2007, contrary to the popular puzzlement of most people who view this topic's title. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Apparently YCM hates titles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 About sending a Granmarg and a Evil Hero - Mailicious Edge to the Grave to Fusion Summon a Dark Gaia makes Onslaughter easy to Summon. Or at least Fusing Malicious Edge and another Onslaughter for more ATK on Dark Gaia. A Level 5 shouldn't be too hard to bring out for his effect to destroy stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 I don't think anyone ever runs Granmarg, but yeah, you understood the Dark Gaia abuse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Nice idea, slightly more interesting summoning requirements than most cards and I like that it requires a card that needs 1 tribute to activate the powerful effect (although nowadays, level 5 cards can usualyl find loopholes through the tribute barrier). OCG, not entirely sure but the way you phrased it seems..awkward? Maybe something more along the lines of 'can only be Specal Summoned by removing from play EARTH monsters whose combined ATK is equal to or more than 4500 from your Graveyard.' I'd take a few hundred off the attack, but not to unbalanced. Nice enough. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shelds9 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 I agree with Thermatic. For the OCG, though I apparently am not good at it, I think should be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play EARTH monsters from your Graveyard whose total combined ATK is at least 4500. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 5 or higher EARTH monster you control to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. Hope you see the changes... It is also a tad OP'ed, but you can work around that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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