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[Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ]

If this is second set, I wonder how's your first is...but well let's review.

I don't really know what's the concept of this set/deck. The pic is pretty bad, so next time, go to devianart or image gallery in this site to look for cool looking pictures. Now to the card, the OCG is pretty bad and but no the worst. Here's my take on the ocg fix.


Gnome Ride-Earth Element
[i]When this card is normal summon to the field, you can Normal Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster to the field.[/i]

Graboid-Earth Element
[i]This card cannot be target by the effect of Spell, Trap or Effect Monster. Once per turn, you can remove 1 Earth Counter from "Stone Pillar" or "Mark Of Earth" and this card to Special Summon 1 "Shieker-Earth Element' from your hand or Deck.[/i]

Shieker-Earth Element
[i]Once per turn, by removing 1 Earth Counter from Stone Pillar" or "Mark Of Earth" and halve this card's ATK, this card cannot be target by the effect of Spell, Trap and Effect Monster and gain 500 DEF until End Phase.[/i]

Stone Dragon-Earth Element
This card can only be Special Summon by tributing 2" Earth Element' monster you control and removing 3 Earth Counter from "Stone Pillar" or "Mark Of Earth".

after fixing the ocg, then T realize it's not just bad but it's has very poor ocg. Some of the card are very underpowered and doesn't really work as a set. So I'll rate them as 3.5 or 4/10. And you're planning to do more sets? get better first dude. Anyway, check out my set/deck, click the booster pack at my sig right down this post.

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Retaliations:
ALONE, these cards suck, with others (that means actually looking at FIRE, and waiting for other elements)
yes the OCG isn't that good, yes I'm noobish, but you have to understand WHERE I'm getting these images and how hard it would be to get alternatives...
this card set is meant to resemble [url="http://www.elementsthegame.com/"]this CCG[/url] and EARTH isn't the strongest of the 12 elements, its actually the most defensive. When combined with other element strategies (usually GRAVITY or TIME) it can play a big role.

Problems with your OCG fixes

Gnome Rider: Sometimes the point of this card IS to tribute it, thats why i didn't add "LV 4 or lower" to it (same with the Ash Eater in my FIRE set, and another person said it was perfectly fine and balanced)

Graboid: ITS SUPPOSED TO BE TIME! The effect in the card is EVOLUTION, thus it needs TIME. Also, the term "card effects" is used on real cards to refer to all forms of card effects. TIME will be the next set of cards.

Stone Dragon: I DONT CARE if the tributed card is an "Earth Element" card, OTHERWISE I would have put that there. DID I? [b]NO![/b]

sorry, had a rage fit there... just read the FIRE set first and the posts that follow and MAYBE you'll understand. If not, fine, I don't care.

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No,no, your rage fits cause who wouldn't be mad if the card they make is bash right. Anyway, the reason why I add [i]you can Normal Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster to the field. [/i] is it would be op e.g-you can summon a level 5-6 monster right away. Stone Dragon is consider Special Summon based on it's summoning condition cause Only monsters that are Level 4 or lower can be Normal Summoned without Tribute (Tribute Summoning is still considered Normal Summoning, however) unless specifically designated on the card text. If you're gonna make more sets, make sure you improve first.

So, when you're gonna make cards, look for pre-existing existing cards for guideline so you can [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page"]click here[/url] to check out cards to help you on your OCG and improve cause ocg can't improve over night.

For pics you can check out sites like [url="http://www.deviantart.com/"]devianart[/url], [url="http://photobucket.com/"]Photobucket[/url] and there's also image gallery here in ycm which you should really check out in the showcase section. The images there may not look like the monster in the ccg but they have the best quality pictures.

so hope this can help you with your future sets. and yeah, do check out my set by clicking the booster link below

[Guest Seth Dawnstrider]

Basing a set of cards on another card game, I haven't seen that before! I'm not sure about quality of the pictures in the other game, but these ones aren't exactly top of the line. From what I'm reading, the strategy of this set is supposed to be accompanied by other sets, which is great and all but you really have to fix the balance of this set, before moving on, not to mention the OCG, spelling and grammar. Overall, I suggest that you make a total revision of the set and fix it up thoroughly.

P.S.: Like Nexus, I would change Gnome Rider's effect - it is too overpowered.

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ALRIGHT! Ill rework all of the cards, let these threads die and post one with both FIRE and EARTH AND maybe TIME too.
FYI: the images on the other game are much smaller, because they dont have to be too big on a computer screen, so yes they are very low quality... If I can find better images Ill use them

[TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya]

they are not good at all

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YAY! USELESS REIEWS!
IM actually working on the cards now and going to post them in another thread new and improved, Im going to have this and FIRE locked, so thanks for the help yous guyz