WolfFan16 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Please leave specific comments. That is all i ask. [spoiler=Lugia (Two different images)] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/9496/225556.jpg[/img][img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9496/225556.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore] This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 WATER monsters on your side of the field. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for every WATER monster in your graveyard. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Ho-oh] [img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/9496/225556.jpg[/img] Lore:When this card is destroyed in battle, Special Summon 1 "Sacred Ash Token" (Winged-Beast type/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 1000/DEF 1800) in Defense Position. The "Sacred Ash Token" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Sychro Summon (or Set). Once during a duel, you may discard this card to Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card using this effect, it's Original ATK is halved.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Articuno] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/232/225556j.jpg[/img] Lore:When this card is Summoned to the field, place 1 "Ice Counter" on 1 card on the field. If the Selected Card is a monster, it can not change it's battle position and it can not attack. If the selected card is a Spell or Trap card, it's effects are negated and the card remains on the field. If this card is destroyed by a FIRE or Pyro type monster, the "Ice counter" is removed and you take 700 damage.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Zapdos] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3199/225556cb.jpg[/img] Lore:This card is also treated as a Thunder type monster. When this card is Summoned, place 1 "Stun Counter" on every monster on your opponent's side of the field. When a monster with a Stun Counter attacks, flip a coin. If you call it right, the attack is negated.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Moltres] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/1598/225556m.jpg[/img] Lore:When this card is Summoned place 2 "Burn Counters" on this card. Your opponent takes 300 Damage for each "Burn Counter" on the field. If this card is destroyed by battle, remove 1 counter from it, and it is not destroyed.[/spoiler] This is my first time dealing with Counters so tell me how to properly word them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigword Posted January 11, 2011 Report Share Posted January 11, 2011 I think alll of yours are pretty good!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2011 [quote name='monty1394' timestamp='1294721065' post='4926845'] very nice...but mine are better [/quote] It is against the rules to advertise your set on someone else's. Also i've seen your set rookie and they could use a lot of work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2011 another bump -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YourOwnDecay Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 hmmmlook nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WolfFan16 Posted January 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 [quote name='YourOwnDecay' timestamp='1295723026' post='4952024'] hmmm look nice 8/10 [/quote] Ok no offence to you but what about it is nice? i hate vague comments Can someone tell me if i used counters right please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoShToFu Posted January 25, 2011 Report Share Posted January 25, 2011 Nice job espicially the first lugia picture:D[quote name='WolfFan16' timestamp='1295918245' post='4958630'] Ok no offence to you but what about it is nice? i hate vague comments Can someone tell me if i used counters right please. [/quote] I think the lugia pictures r nicei like the lugia pictures especially the first onei like the lugia pictures especially the first one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkheoift Posted August 18, 2011 Report Share Posted August 18, 2011 Good job it's hard to make pokemon cards into yugioh cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 I really like the pictures, but its supposed to say "destroyed [b]by[/b] battle", not "destroyed [b]in[/b] battle". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurogamiXXI Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 [i]Lore:When this card is Summoned place 2 "Burn Counters" on this card. [b]Your opponent takes 300 Damage for each "Burn Counter" on the field[/b]. If this card is destroyed by battle, remove 1 counter from it, and it is not destroyed.[/i] Specify when (e.g. Standby Phase, End Phase). Also, I don't think counters could be placed on a face-down card (please correct me if I'm wrong). So Articuno's effect can only place counters on face-up Spell/Traps. And don't use "you may"; "you can" is correct and sounds much better. The monsters are below average in my opinion. YGO is so fast-paced now, so Tribute Summon monsters don't work well. The effects aren't too powerful either. Lugia might be good in frog decks. EDIT: I just realized this thread was necrobumped >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted August 19, 2011 Report Share Posted August 19, 2011 Oh, right, you also shouldn't put quotation marks after counter and before burn. Instead of "Burn Counter", it should just be Burn Counter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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