........! Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3601/83478.jpg[/img] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3601/83478.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/3601/83478.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/3601/83478.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3601/83478.jpg[/img] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2792/83478i.jpg[/img] I'm pretty sure I have a few OCG errors so lemme know what they are cause I can't pin-point them. Edited 2-D: [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3451/83478a.jpg[/img] Lore: This monster can only attack your opponent directly. This monster cannot attack unless the monsters "Noodle", "Russel" and "Murdoc" are on the field. If this monster attacks successfully remove 1000ATK points from this monster and send it to the Graveyard. There that should be a little bit better... Edit Noodle: [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/3601/83478.jpg[/img] Lore: This monster cannot attack unless the monster "Guitar" is on the field. If this monster is on the field for three turns or more, summon one Guitar Token with the following: LIGHT, Normal, 0 ATK, 0 DEF "A very loud Guitar that Noodle plays." Edit Murdoc: [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3601/83478.jpg[/img] Lore: When this monster is summoned you may summon up to 3 Fiend-type monsters that are level 6 or lower, then in 3 turns they are removed from play, this monster then loses 1000ATK points and gains 1500DEF points. This monster cannot attack unless the spell card "Demonic Base" was played. I forgot if type is suppose to have a capital T or not, haven't been on in a while ^^ Russel Edit: [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/3601/83478.jpg[/img] Lore: When this monster is summoned, if you have 1 Illusion magic-type monster in your Graveyard you may summon it, if that monster is "Del tha Ghost Rapper" then that monster gains 500ATK points. This monster cannot attack unless the spell card "Drums" was activated on the field. New addition, Del Tha Ghost Rapper: [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/3601/83478.jpg[/img] Lore: When this monster is summoned successfully by the effect of "Russel" then summon one Gorilla Token on to your opponents side of the field with the following: DARK, level 5, Beast-type, 1500ATK, 1200DEF, "This monster must attack once per turn, if it fails to do so you must pay 500 lifepoints. If this monster is successful in destroying another monster then you must pay 200 lifepoints." For nay say-ers, Illusion magic-type: "Black Magic, White Magic, Sea Beast, Illusion Magic, and Dragon Magic are among the additional Types used in the Bandai card game."-YugiohWikia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xenogears Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Extremly OP'ed, bad pics, bad OCG, boring effects. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 What the guy above said^ If you want me to fix OCG erors, post down the lore for the cards first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
........! Posted January 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 [quote name='X_Vongola_X' timestamp='1294588347' post='4922791'] Extremly OP'ed, bad pics, bad OCG, boring effects. 3/10 [/quote] Pics, agreed. The people that uploaded those videos to youtube needs to add a 1080p HD instead of just 720. Op'd, 2-D yes, the rest not to much. Murdoc is actually underpowered, lvl 9 and only 4000atk points and his need for the spell card is holding back. I had this same problem with another person and although it would be cleaner to do PMing to fix OCG, I'd rather not flood my inbox, that's pretty much what these threads are for, to what I'm going to say you can't just say OCG errors and then not say what they are. I'm almost certain there's a rule against that >.> but I could be wrong. Russel is as well underpowered an average level 4 monster has about 1500 to 1800 atk and I know for sure there's problems with how I have the token summon on noodle set up so please help me fix that. Now 2-D, MASSIVLY op'd since he can only attack directly, but that's why you have a spell card like reflect always faced down But I think I will add something to his effect to make him a bit less op'd. Again please tell me the OCG errors so I can fix them immediately. We don't play around in the AoC section D< well, most the time. Edit: Boring effects? Now that's ridiculous. Russel and Murdoc, maybe, but there not done O_O When all these are done I plan for them all to have different effects, and if you would review some of my other cards you would noticed that I have only used the same effect maybe 2 or 3 times out of almost 50 cards. Edit2: OH! One more thing! "WAS"!! I mean for it to be there. Meaning if the spell card was activated before but not on the field currently it still counts, loopholes gotta love em' ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
........! Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 *Bump* Seriously someone tell me the OCG errors so I can fix them, no pming!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
........! Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Last bump. Please, someone say something. come on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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