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Howl the Owl


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Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned by discarded 3 cards from your hand. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token"(Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Attack Position. Once during each player's End Phase, inflict damage 200 points of damage to your opponent for each face-up "Owl Token" on your side of the field.

I know the OCG is probably wrong but I haven't made a card in a while so I'm kinda rusty.
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"Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned by [u][b]discarded[/b][/u] 3 cards from your hand. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token[u][b]"([/b][/u]Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Attack Position. Once during each player's End Phase, inflict damage 200 points of damage to your opponent for each face-up "Owl Token" on your side of the field."

Change "discarded" to "discarding," and put a space between "Owl Token" and (Winged Beast-Type....

I would also change "Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in [b]Attack Position[/b]" to "Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in [b]face-up Defense Position[/b]." That will make the card a little more potent.

Good card, though.
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