Bronzegoldquake Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/2029/274409.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned by discarded 3 cards from your hand. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token"(Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Attack Position. Once during each player's End Phase, inflict damage 200 points of damage to your opponent for each face-up "Owl Token" on your side of the field. I know the OCG is probably wrong but I haven't made a card in a while so I'm kinda rusty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Most of your ocg is right. I see a couple capitalization errors, but not much else. But overall nice card. Seems pretty balanced in the sense that you can summon more monsters, and inflict burn at the price of 3 discards. KIU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinato Demise of Oblivion Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 OOOHHH i love that pic and the name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 "Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned by [u][b]discarded[/b][/u] 3 cards from your hand. Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token[u][b]"([/b][/u]Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Attack Position. Once during each player's End Phase, inflict damage 200 points of damage to your opponent for each face-up "Owl Token" on your side of the field." Change "discarded" to "discarding," and put a space between "Owl Token" and (Winged Beast-Type.... I would also change "Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in [b]Attack Position[/b]" to "Once per turn, Special Summon 1 "Owl Token" (Winged Beast-Type/WIND/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in [b]face-up Defense Position[/b]." That will make the card a little more potent. Good card, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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