War Chess Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Hey ! Now I created the "Data" monsters only with Jazin Kay's pictures. Enjoy. [spoiler=The "Data" monsters are split in 3 sections :] [spoiler=The minor Data;] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/8504/56865u.jpg[/img] Lore: During either player's turn, you can discard this from your hand to the Graveyard and draw 1 card. If you would take 1000 or more damage, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If you Special Summon this card in this way, you take no damage this turn. [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is removed from the field, add 1 "Data" monster from your hand or Graveyard to your Deck. Shuffle your Deck and draw 1 card. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2995/56865h.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 1000 Life Points and draw 1 card. This card gains 1300 ATK until the End Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Data Moderators;] [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/3404/56865d.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Data" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsters When this card destroys a monster by battle, draw 1 card. If this card attacks, no other monsters you control can attack this turn. [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: You cannot draw cards during your Draw Phase. During your Standby Phase, draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to return 1 card on the field to the its owner's hand. [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/882/56865l.jpg[/img] Lore: If you each time you draw a card outside your Draw Phase, this card gains 200 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if you have 3 or more cards in your hand.[spoiler=NOTES]Yes, this card was made after our moderator of the Graphic Section, Yin. Remember she works hard, and don't get in trouble with her.[/spoiler] [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/8755/56865.jpg[/img] Lore: All "Data Moderator" monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent. [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/4205/56865m.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Data" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsters During your Battle Phase, discard 1 card from your hand or take 800 damage. When you take damage, this card loses 300 ATK until your Standby Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=And the Data Administrator;] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4289/56865y.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Data Integration" or by its own effect. This card gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all "Data" monsters in your Graveyard when this card was Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can reduce this card's ATK by 900 to draw 1 card. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by a card effect, remove from play 1 "Data" monster from your Graveyard instead.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Please correct my OCG, comment on balance and playability. If you liked this topic, give me an internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Can't believe no one commented on this. BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Raging Man:. Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 i believe theyr nice, but they seem oP, they let u draw a lot and the costs r low. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakus1111 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote]Lore: During either player's turn, you can discard this from your hand to the Graveyard and draw 1 card. If you would take 1000 or more damage, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you take no damage this turn.[/quote] (Data Angel) make sure to specify what kind of damage. also, change "When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you take no damage this turn" to "You take no damage (specify type of damage) for the rest of the turn that this effect was activated" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='Drakus1111' timestamp='1294669568' post='4925235'] (Data Angel) make sure to specify what kind of damage. also, change "When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you take no damage this turn" to "You take no damage (specify type of damage) for the rest of the turn that this effect was activated" [/quote] Thanks for your opinion, but the intention of not having damage specified, is to say effect and battle damage. And the second thing, there's nothing wrong with Special Summoned by its own effect. Anyway, can't you rate the idea and comment on balance, playability and stuff ? EDIT- I can change it to "If you Special Summon this card in this way". I will, but only the lore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakus1111 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote]Anyway, can't you rate the idea and comment on balance, playability and stuff ? [/quote] yo, sorry i didn't finish what i was saying or my rating. I had to get offline for a while, and had no way of saving what i had, so i just posted it. anyways, you could reword Angel's effect to read: "During either player's turn, you can discard this from your hand to the Graveyard to draw 1 card. If you would take 1000 or more damage of any type, you may Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, you take no damage of any type for the remainder of the turn that it was summoned" or something of that nature. note that this cannot be used to negate costs. Centrus Jay: [quote]no other monsters you control can attack this turn.[/quote] this could be reworded to say "no other monsters you control can declare an attack during the same turn as this card attacks" Miss Yin: [quote]If you each time you draw a card outside your Draw Phase, this card gains 200 ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if you have 3 or more cards in your hand.[/quote] reword: "Each time you draw a card(s) outside of the draw phase, this card gains 200 ATK. if there are three or more cards in your hand, then this card cannot be destroyed by battle" I think this may be a little bit overpowered after a while, and seeing as this archetype would focus on draw power, keeping it alive would be somewhat easy, although it can still be destroyed by card effects. Cytron:[quote] During your Battle Phase, discard 1 card from your hand or take 800 damage. When you take damage, this card loses 300 ATK until your Standby Phase. [/quote] i'm not sure if you mean to say "when you take damage from this card, reduce its ATK by 300 until the end phase" or not. I think the -300 ATK should be permanent, or the decrease should be greater, or the life point damage should be greater, just because it seems a little less op. it would increase the desire to discard a card, as the penalty would be higher. you could also choose a compromise, like inflicting 1000 LP to yourself, and lose 1000 ATK until the end phase of your next turn. just an idea. Lysandra: [quote]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Data Integration" or by its own effect. This card gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all "Data" monsters in your Graveyard when this card was Special Summoned. Once per turn, you can reduce this card's ATK by 900 to draw 1 card. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by a card effect, remove from play 1 "Data" monster from your Graveyard instead. [/quote] 1) What is the effect of "Data Integration"? is it specifically to summon this card, or is it for data in general? or maybe machines? 2) as its original ATK is "?" i think it should say "This card's ATK becomes the combined ATK of all "Data" monsters in the graveyard" as opposed to "this card gains . . . " 3) it mentions being special summoned by its own effect, yet it has no reviving effect. either remove that bit or add a revival effect. All-in-all, i think this is only [i]slightly[/i] OP, and could use some recycling support, to prevent decking out. i give an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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War Chess Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 I can't believe I still have barely no comments. BUMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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