BloodPact Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 This is my first set of cards and i would love feedback. Hope you like 'em. [spoiler]Monsters; [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-001.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-002.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-003.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-004.jpg[/IMG] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a “Celestial Figure” monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. A monster equipped with this card loses 800 ATK and can attack you opponent directly. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.). [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-005.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-006.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-007.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-008.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-009.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-010.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-011.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-012.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-013.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-014.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-015.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-016.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-017.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler]Spells; [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-018.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-019.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-020.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-021.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-022.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-023.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-024.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-025.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-026.jpg[/IMG] This card gains effects based on the monster Attributes you control: -LIGHT; If you draw a “Celestial Figure” card during your Draw Phase, draw 1 additional card. -FIRE; Every time a “Celestial Figure” card is sent to the graveyard, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. -EARTH; All face-up “Celestial Figure” monsters you control gain 500 ATK. -WATER; Every time a “Celestial Figure” card enters the field, you gain 300 Life Points. -WIND; When a “Celestial Figure” monster you control is destroyed, add 1 “Celestial Figure” card from your Deck to your Hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler]Traps; [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-027.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-028.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-029.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll235/pokedexnick/Celestial%20Figures%20YCM%20Cards/STAR-030.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted January 20, 2011 Report Share Posted January 20, 2011 The theme of the deck is quite unique and the pictures seem like they've been taken straight from the astronomy books, which in my opinion is great, but others may think differently. Although the balance is there and the strategy is easy to utilize, it isn't original at all and to such a degree, that I'll dare to say you've copied and pasted the effects of official cards and just pasted them onto your own. Also, I can see OCG errors in some cards but it's nothing too significant. Overall, if I were you, I'd think of more original effects for my cards. P.S.: About Celestial Figure - The Scales - there is no "winning and loosing of battles" in card effects, instead you should replace them with "successfully destroys a monster" and "is destroyed by battle". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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