Antwo13 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 forum #5. (First set, adding more soon.) Please rate, comment, tell me what you think. Synchro Monsters [img]http://i51.tinypic.com/x6fyg9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i52.tinypic.com/s63xa1.jpg[/img] Effect Monsters [img]http://i55.tinypic.com/amcljm.jpg[/img][img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2e4lz02.jpg[/img] [img]http://i51.tinypic.com/29ksvgi.jpg[/img][img]http://i51.tinypic.com/2el4fhd.jpg[/img] [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2gu9unr.jpg[/img][img]http://i51.tinypic.com/okpw11.jpg[/img] Spell Cards [img]http://i52.tinypic.com/9bjj8z.jpg[/img][img]http://i52.tinypic.com/qn9p21.jpg[/img] [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/29qjd5z.jpg[/img] Trap Cards [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2uhsc3b.jpg[/img][img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2uhoaiw.jpg[/img] [img]http://i52.tinypic.com/nywc5l.jpg[/img] ____________________________ Please let me know if there are any edits i may make. Im farily new so send a message or friend request if you'd like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antwo13 Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 It would be nice if sumone reviewed these, -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 I can say there is originality here and the pictures are also very nice. I cannot agree on the same for the startegy, though - paying so much Life Points for every card effect is too much i.e. after you activate 2-3 spells and the effects of 1-2 monsters, you'll be down to 3000, if not lower. It effects the cards' balance as well, it is to your disadvantage, believe it or not (I think you should revise these cards' disadvantages). I also find some OCG errors here and there and a lot of YGO grammatical errors and some regular grammatical errors. (I advise you to look over your cards again and fix them, if you need help on that, reply me and I will try to assist you as soon as I can.) Below are the words you should write with capital letters: Summon, Normal Summon, Special Summon, Synchro Summon, Ritual Summon, Fusion Summon, Dark Synchro Summon Life Points, Deck, Graveyard, Token, Monster Card Zone, Spell and (&) Trap Card Zone, Monster Card, Normal Monster Card, Synchro Monster Card, Dark Synchro Monster Card, Ritual Monster Card, Fusion Monster Card, Spell, Trap, Spell Card, Trap Card, Normal Spell Card, Normal Trap Card, Field Spell Card, Continuous Spell Card, Continuous Trap Card, Counter Trap Card, Quickplay Spell Card, Ritual Spell Card, Equip Spell Card, Equip Trap Card Field Spell Card Zone, Graveyard Zone, Deck Zone, Extra Deck Zone, Extra Deck Draw Phase, Standby Phase, Main Phase, Battle Phase, End Phase Tuner Monster, Dark Tuner Monster, Effect Monster, Ritual Monster, Fusion Monster, Sunchro Monster, Normal Monster, Spirit Monster, Union Monster, Toon Monster, Dark Synchro Monster I may have missed something, if so, you should consult with other forum members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antwo13 Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Seth Dawnstrider' timestamp='1295294560' post='4941230'] [/quote] Thanks for the tips Im going to edit them now and add some different effects that will help Life Point gain as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gabrielisarr Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Interesting! I love machine cards too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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